Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

Jarylan

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Dhaal's private party event, talking to Xhanni about Utopian Skies. Should be "doubt".

“Without a double.” Xhanni nods vigorously
 

Skunkupine

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Gayll Hyper Mount:
Despite being a massive exhibitionist, you mistakenly came here with your shafts covered up, but all that’s about to change. You whip off your ERROR: COULD NOT FIND ATTRIBUTE "cortchCovers" FOR OBJ "pc" in a hurry

exposing yourself just in time for your excited exposure to race your softened genitalia to rapid, full erection.You
Missing space

It is ecstasy, letting your {bestial }body jackhammer on the insensate nuka’s cream-flooded quim.
Parser leak?
 
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Skunkupine

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Rummi: mount (taur)
How dare she stop you from thrusting, and humping, and rutting until you bury yourself to the hilt in the first hold one of your throbbing cocks can find
Should probably be "hole"
 

Skunkupine

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Attacked by the Shalin Hunter after finding something in the ground:

You launch into the sky. You are flying!

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During the fight with Overqueen Ysolte, the first option of being grappled is "Grope" and if chosen, the next option is "Do Nothing".

These appear to be reversed, do nothing should come first, and your character gets the idea to grope her, them actually does so.
 

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Jarylan

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Overqueen Ysolte, again, choosing cunnilingus after winning, final paragraph. A wild bracket has appeared!

You wouldn’t mind that; Overqueen Mel’Ysolte slithers from the room, disappearing into the guts of her territory once again. For all intents and purposes, that felt like a one-night stand... but you kind of hope you meet her again. That tongue was wild!]
 

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Meant to start a new game, play around, no work I told myself, I'm not looking for typos and errors.

Sadly, once I managed to turn that part of my brain on, I can't turn it off. The game insists I have no tail-cock to use on the Vanae Huntress, though I have a perfectly fine and rather modest Zaika tail.

Edit: Same error with the Vanae maiden too.
 

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Hopefully all fixed for the next release, up to this point.

The game insists I have no tail-cock to use on the Vanae Huntress, though I have a perfectly fine and rather modest Zaika tail.
The check is correct, but I've added some extra information to the tooltip to help with clarity. Not all tail-cock scenes are compatible for any kind of tail-cock. For this particular scene, it was written with specifically parasitic cockvine tails in mind. Your character won't be eligible if they have a non-cockvine type tail. (At the time when the scene was written, I think cockvines were the only kind of tail-cock available--now however, it is possible to gain other kinds of tail-cock tail types of the non-parasitic variety.)
 

PanzerGuitar00

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bit of an oversight here, as Lith only has one proper tailcunt


Suddenly, Lithium Flower tenses, overwhelmed by her milk-high. Her tails buck wildly against you, showering your groin with thick jizz while her mouth clamps tightly on your milk-tank.
 

PanzerGuitar00

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maybe add some ellipses or something to signify that theres meant to be a.... idk the terminology but you get what im going for here, yeah?


“It felt so good seeing them again, thank you Jinx.”

“The pleasure was all mine. Look, right there! Isn’t that?”

The chromed-up cutie blinks a few times, unable to process what’s happening. Lithium Flower swirls on her agile tentacles, making her rich jewelr
 

PanzerGuitar00

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the grammar and wording overall in this paragraph could use some touching up, especially at the end. im not sure exactly how to rewrite it so ill leave it to your discression.

“They shipped leyaks into the building some time ago. She couldn’t investigate more, fearing to be spotted by the warden: a tall zaika with weapons and gear she hasn’t seen before — not even an XOs.”
 

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Add something in between here. dealers choice.

What better way for your cute little to start the day than to find out that their mom is visiting?
 

PanzerGuitar00

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theres a bit of redundency here in in this scene. maybe needs a bit of a rewrite so it doesnt feel like its repeating itself





"After breakfast, you take them to brush their sharp teeth – both rows – which they do with a level of diligence you wouldn’t expect from kids. However, when it comes to changing into day clothes, they suddenly rebel with words like ‘Awww!’ and ‘But whyyy?!’ As it turns out, they absolutely love their pajamas and would laze around in them the whole day if allowed. The caretaker explains that their clothes are made from a special fabric, so that they don’t tear from the cragginess of the kids’ scales.

When you look closely, you see that their scales are indeed much thicker than when they were born; it feels like yesterday! By the stars, now that you think of it, behemoths grow up fast! They arrived not so long ago, and they already have a full set of scale plates on their forelimbs.

Your little kaiju are big enough to play with your other kids, though the staff has to be attentive at all times because of behemoths’ tendency to get competitive. They love fighting each other, and they instinctively expect others to be the same way. However, since their bodies are strong and armored, they can easily hurt other children by accident, so it’s important for them to learn about empathy and self-restraint.

With some persistence and gentle words, you finally convince the kids to change into their day clothes. The next couple of hours are spent playing in the jungle, and ironically YOU have to play the part of the building-sized monster that’s destroying the city and threatening world peace. Apparently, they found out about the kaiju ge"
 

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the grammar and wording overall in this paragraph could use some touching up, especially at the end. im not sure exactly how to rewrite it so ill leave it to your discression.

“They shipped leyaks into the building some time ago. She couldn’t investigate more, fearing to be spotted by the warden: a tall zaika with weapons and gear she hasn’t seen before — not even an XOs.”
Ah, I glossed over the end.

- not even on XOs." would seem to be the idea that is being conveyed.
 
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Jarylan

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Was breeding the gryvain techie on FIRST-14. Found this error, double quote marks. Also, all text past those quotes was italicized.

““Maybe stick with the wives... or someone you’re familiar with,” you suggest, planting another kiss on her night-dark lips.

She chuckles softly, squeezing you inside and out. “What a romantic... well, you keep that attitude up and this galaxy will be drowning you in pussy, sweet thing. As for me... hrm, maybe I will stick core-ward. Hate to leave the girls worrying about me! Hehe, you go on now and let me soak in the afterglow. And clean up, because Goddess did I make a mess out of myself. It’d be a shame if somebody took a pic of me and sent it to all my wives while I’m so helpless and exhausted.”
 
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Kind of a silly one. So, i was looking at the achievemets' tab (side note: do anyone checks their achievements? At all?), and it seems the description for the "Doggone Tragedy" achievement misspells the word Milodans:

Allow Korg’ii Hold to be overrun by the Milodon.
 

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Noticed while going along Tarkus that when Dane is standing out front of Shekka's shop, the entire paragraph is bold. I think this is an error, as it doesn't happen any other time in the game.

Dane is standing outside of Shekka’s Widget Warehouse, his four arms crossed over his chest. His white-furred ears flick up in recognition. “You’ve got a lot of balls showing up here,” he growls before smiling. “Boss said not to stop you, and after last time, I’m not sure I’d want to try. Just don’t start any trouble, all right?” He gives you an unsubtle wink.
 

LeDoraggo

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Gwon's "Creampie Her" scene has a few sections where a few spaces were omitted:

Pushing forward, the gabilani’s thick cleft parts around your girth with a suckling wetness that straightens your spine and makes youtighten your grip on her hips [...]

[...] She gasps and threads her armsunder yours to take hold of the back of your shoulders, gripping tightly and begging you to go deeper still.Despite the relatively small stature of her upper body, her sinful sex is deep enough to take even your tremendous length! [...]

[...] Feeling the urgency of your rushing release at hand, all six of the drider’s lower legs, her fat-thighed pedipalps, and her upper arms wrap around you, clinging so tightly, you couldn’t pull out even if you’d wanted to.Strokes of cum lance their way down the drider’s seemingly endless vaginal passage, thick ropes of cream painting every inner fold with your outpouring.Your cantaloupe-sized testes tighten and pulse, lurching upwards with muscular contractions as they thicken and pound out the rhythm of your climax against the goblin’s fluid-slick nethers.The outpouring of your cum inundates her fertile valley with untold gallons and you just keep pumping [...]
 

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Noticed while going along Tarkus that when Dane is standing out front of Shekka's shop, the entire paragraph is bold. I think this is an error, as it doesn't happen any other time in the game.

Dane is standing outside of Shekka’s Widget Warehouse, his four arms crossed over his chest. His white-furred ears flick up in recognition. “You’ve got a lot of balls showing up here,” he growls before smiling. “Boss said not to stop you, and after last time, I’m not sure I’d want to try. Just don’t start any trouble, all right?” He gives you an unsubtle wink.
its always been like this to give directions to players. strangely, not a lot of people read in a text based game. though in this case, its highly likely that players arent rereading each tile description every time they move around, especially once theyve been there.
 

LeDoraggo

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its always been like this to give directions to players. strangely, not a lot of people read in a text based game.
Always tought the same, that it only was highlighted so the player can see it and go "wait, something's happening", in case they miss it
 

LeDoraggo

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Wild quotation mark found on Lithium Flower's date second page (sex scene selection), where she takes you to her apartment at Gabtown:

“Here we are,” the chromed zaika says, fidgeting with the keyhole.
 

LeDoraggo

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Don't know if it's a display glitch or a grammar error, but i'll leave this here just in case:
 

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