Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

Jarylan

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Dhaal's private party event, talking to Xhanni about Utopian Skies. Should be "doubt".

“Without a double.” Xhanni nods vigorously
 

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Gayll Hyper Mount:
Despite being a massive exhibitionist, you mistakenly came here with your shafts covered up, but all that’s about to change. You whip off your ERROR: COULD NOT FIND ATTRIBUTE "cortchCovers" FOR OBJ "pc" in a hurry

exposing yourself just in time for your excited exposure to race your softened genitalia to rapid, full erection.You
Missing space

It is ecstasy, letting your {bestial }body jackhammer on the insensate nuka’s cream-flooded quim.
Parser leak?
 
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Rummi: mount (taur)
How dare she stop you from thrusting, and humping, and rutting until you bury yourself to the hilt in the first hold one of your throbbing cocks can find
Should probably be "hole"
 

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During the fight with Overqueen Ysolte, the first option of being grappled is "Grope" and if chosen, the next option is "Do Nothing".

These appear to be reversed, do nothing should come first, and your character gets the idea to grope her, them actually does so.
 

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Overqueen Ysolte, again, choosing cunnilingus after winning, final paragraph. A wild bracket has appeared!

You wouldn’t mind that; Overqueen Mel’Ysolte slithers from the room, disappearing into the guts of her territory once again. For all intents and purposes, that felt like a one-night stand... but you kind of hope you meet her again. That tongue was wild!]
 

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Meant to start a new game, play around, no work I told myself, I'm not looking for typos and errors.

Sadly, once I managed to turn that part of my brain on, I can't turn it off. The game insists I have no tail-cock to use on the Vanae Huntress, though I have a perfectly fine and rather modest Zaika tail.

Edit: Same error with the Vanae maiden too.
 

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Hopefully all fixed for the next release, up to this point.

The game insists I have no tail-cock to use on the Vanae Huntress, though I have a perfectly fine and rather modest Zaika tail.
The check is correct, but I've added some extra information to the tooltip to help with clarity. Not all tail-cock scenes are compatible for any kind of tail-cock. For this particular scene, it was written with specifically parasitic cockvine tails in mind. Your character won't be eligible if they have a non-cockvine type tail. (At the time when the scene was written, I think cockvines were the only kind of tail-cock available--now however, it is possible to gain other kinds of tail-cock tail types of the non-parasitic variety.)
 
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PanzerGuitar00

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bit of an oversight here, as Lith only has one proper tailcunt


Suddenly, Lithium Flower tenses, overwhelmed by her milk-high. Her tails buck wildly against you, showering your groin with thick jizz while her mouth clamps tightly on your milk-tank.
 

PanzerGuitar00

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maybe add some ellipses or something to signify that theres meant to be a.... idk the terminology but you get what im going for here, yeah?


“It felt so good seeing them again, thank you Jinx.”

“The pleasure was all mine. Look, right there! Isn’t that?”

The chromed-up cutie blinks a few times, unable to process what’s happening. Lithium Flower swirls on her agile tentacles, making her rich jewelr
 

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the grammar and wording overall in this paragraph could use some touching up, especially at the end. im not sure exactly how to rewrite it so ill leave it to your discression.

“They shipped leyaks into the building some time ago. She couldn’t investigate more, fearing to be spotted by the warden: a tall zaika with weapons and gear she hasn’t seen before — not even an XOs.”
 

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Add something in between here. dealers choice.

What better way for your cute little to start the day than to find out that their mom is visiting?
 

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theres a bit of redundency here in in this scene. maybe needs a bit of a rewrite so it doesnt feel like its repeating itself





"After breakfast, you take them to brush their sharp teeth – both rows – which they do with a level of diligence you wouldn’t expect from kids. However, when it comes to changing into day clothes, they suddenly rebel with words like ‘Awww!’ and ‘But whyyy?!’ As it turns out, they absolutely love their pajamas and would laze around in them the whole day if allowed. The caretaker explains that their clothes are made from a special fabric, so that they don’t tear from the cragginess of the kids’ scales.

When you look closely, you see that their scales are indeed much thicker than when they were born; it feels like yesterday! By the stars, now that you think of it, behemoths grow up fast! They arrived not so long ago, and they already have a full set of scale plates on their forelimbs.

Your little kaiju are big enough to play with your other kids, though the staff has to be attentive at all times because of behemoths’ tendency to get competitive. They love fighting each other, and they instinctively expect others to be the same way. However, since their bodies are strong and armored, they can easily hurt other children by accident, so it’s important for them to learn about empathy and self-restraint.

With some persistence and gentle words, you finally convince the kids to change into their day clothes. The next couple of hours are spent playing in the jungle, and ironically YOU have to play the part of the building-sized monster that’s destroying the city and threatening world peace. Apparently, they found out about the kaiju ge"
 

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the grammar and wording overall in this paragraph could use some touching up, especially at the end. im not sure exactly how to rewrite it so ill leave it to your discression.

“They shipped leyaks into the building some time ago. She couldn’t investigate more, fearing to be spotted by the warden: a tall zaika with weapons and gear she hasn’t seen before — not even an XOs.”
Ah, I glossed over the end.

- not even on XOs." would seem to be the idea that is being conveyed.