Hello this is my first time posting here, so please tell me if I'm doing something wrong, so I can stop being that way in the future.
I did a thing! It's a new enemy intended for the Frostwood, but I can change it if so desired. The elevator pitch is, that Jarrok was formerly a big strong manly bandit, but got turned into a bimbo. His mind is still manly and mean, but he is starting to slip into becoming more of a bimbo. The appeal is supposed to be that you put a pretty hateable character into his place, by using his new oversexed body which is in contrast with his macho personality.
Link:
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PS: I left it up here, before submitting, for a bit for feedback. All the feedback I got was great and appreciated. Thanks for taking time out of your day to read it all and going through the effort of fixing my mistakes. It's greatly appreciated and I hope that I can employ your tips in the future.
I did a thing! It's a new enemy intended for the Frostwood, but I can change it if so desired. The elevator pitch is, that Jarrok was formerly a big strong manly bandit, but got turned into a bimbo. His mind is still manly and mean, but he is starting to slip into becoming more of a bimbo. The appeal is supposed to be that you put a pretty hateable character into his place, by using his new oversexed body which is in contrast with his macho personality.
Link:
Jarrok
COC2: Jarrok, the Bimbo Bandit by kleinerpolterghast (Obligatory apology, that english isn’t my first language. It’s german.) Introduction Jarrok is a bandit, who was formerly a big muscular hunk of a man but got turned into a bimbo and is now trying to gather money to buy the ingredients to t...
PS: I left it up here, before submitting, for a bit for feedback. All the feedback I got was great and appreciated. Thanks for taking time out of your day to read it all and going through the effort of fixing my mistakes. It's greatly appreciated and I hope that I can employ your tips in the future.
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