[Submitted] ExtraMeet

[Fr0sty]

So after many weeks of on and off work, I've finally gotten this project to a point I feel I can share progress.

I originally pitched this idea over in the Idea section, and it seemed to be fairly well received. The project is still a big WIP, and I don't expect to fully complete it for awhile yet.

ExtraMeet: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bg6ghHmFqxh-WAqBvDslo1zXhFigxjOLvNNZpDqQU3o/edit

I don't plan on adding any more characters to the current form of the project, mostly because I don't want to over bloat the whole thing. If it gets in, I'll add more characters with more diverse kinks and such then. For now, I'm mostly trying to keep is simple.

The Doc is mostly edited, but I always miss stuff so any help in that department would be greatly appreciated.

 

[Xeivous]

doc is set to view only, we can't make comments.

That said, this is the sort of thing that is easily added to. So other authors can easily dump little additions to it.

 

[Fr0sty]

Fixed

 

[moobere]

All the yes. I already love it.

 

[Xeivous]

It's still view only for me.

 

[Fr0sty]

Yeah, I goofed and changed the settings on a different doc I had open, NOW it should be fine.

 

[Evil]

Nice work so far, looking forward to the completed piece.

And like I said before, don't feel that you have to do every type of character to begin with, from the look of it, it could be a great launch platform for new NPCs.

Keep up the good work.

 

[Xeivous]

Interesting concept. Though I do have to say that the sex scenes could use just a bit more meat on them. Especially in the way of checking pc stats and having variance if they're gonna be as short as they are. For example LadyGlamor's scene could check the pc's cum output and their exhibitionism score.

 

[Libelous]

Love where things are going, fun read with a lot of character. Looking forward for more!!

 

[moobere]

Interesting concept. Though I do have to say that the sex scenes could use just a bit more meat on them. Especially in the way of checking pc stats and having variance if they're gonna be as short as they are. For example LadyGlamor's scene could check the pc's cum output and their exhibitionism score.

And for the Myrellion Dzaan make it less vauge for how long the PCs shlong needs to be

 

[Zavos]

This looks great so far.

 

[valk42]

Looks great, sorry for the excess of edits, the doc wont let me delete my own suggestions

 

[XBoxMaster131]

Like I said in the other thread, fingers crossed that this doesn't backfire and a lot of creativity and potential gets wasted.

 

[sor]

am soo looking furor the Gryvian one

 

[PalletTown]

I like it. I has a bit of something for everyone and it opens up avenues for relatively easy expansions. Btw, as mentioned in one a kiro's scenes, there already is an established dating site thing in TiTs. I just curious why you didn't take its name.

 

[Evil]

There's no harm in a little competition.
We've got Tinder, Bumble, Grindr, Happn and Bristlr (well, I just found that existed...honestly, I didn't think I could be surprised anymore but there we go...)

In a hyper capitalist future like TiTS, everyone wants to make their fortune their own way, and why go on a dangerous planet rush when you could just make a codex app instead?

 

[Xeivous]

There's no harm in a little competition.
We've got Tinder, Bumble, Grindr, Happn and Bristlr (well, I just found that existed...honestly, I didn't think I could be surprised anymore but there we go...)

In a hyper capitalist future like TiTS, everyone wants to make their fortune their own way, and why go on a dangerous planet rush when you could just make a codex app instead?

Megacorps being a thing, I find it hard to believe there are a half dozen major businesses doing the same thing. Barring local and specialized services, there's probably at best 2 or 3 major dating apps covering the galaxy.

 

[Evil]

Not necessarily. A Mega-Corp might have several holdings that could be in competition with each other, but the money still leads back to hq. Its still avenues of profits at the end of the day.

Likewise, a company could put out different products to cover different markets and fill certain niches.

Anyway, this is getting off topic.

 

[Fr0sty]

I like it. I has a bit of something for everyone and it opens up avenues for relatively easy expansions. Btw, as mentioned in one a kiro's scenes, there already is an established dating site thing in TiTs. I just curious why you didn't take its name.

ExtraMeet was name dropped already in universe during the Anno scene where she hooks up with a Gryvain she met on the site. There was a large discussion about it over on the Idea forums when I pitched the idea, and Savin said GalLink (the thing Kiro uses) was more like Facebook than Tinder.

 

[Gammerick]

Seems good, but I feel like one or two of them could change depending on what you've already done.

For example the Nyrea girl #1Huntress could play a dom scene regularly but if you got the Nyrean Royal perk she'd be submissive to you instead.

 

[NotYouNorI]

Not all nyrea in the region are under Taivra's rule.

 

[Lashcharge]

This Gdoc could really use a table of contents.

 

[Fr0sty]

This Gdoc could really use a table of contents.

The Outline acts like one.

 

[Lashcharge]

It's a good project through you should definitly add more details to the Sex and Race section.

Putting Other in Sex and Human+ in races are not the best solutions.

 

[Miakoda]

This is shaping up nicely! Unfortunately for me, most of the commentary I had has already been said, so yeah.

 

[Fr0sty]

Big update to the Doc. Added sex scenes for ReDD, V-KO, SneakySnek, MidnightXRose, MistressVenom, and Ripped4YourPleasure. I tried making these scenes a bit longer than the previous ones to see how that works out. They all have had a quick editing pass, but are likely still full of small errors, so any help with them would be great.

I'm likely going to take a week off writing completely to catch up on some things, then hit the ground running and try to pound out the last 6 sex scenes the week after that, so the next update should be around two weeks or so.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

SneakySnek

Oh please dear god let this be a naga!

 

[Fr0sty]

Couple days later than I wanted, but I've added the last six sex scenes in for Hawtstuff, SexyyDaddyy, EnchantingFae, True_Power69, Rebel23, and Storm_Dragon. I also went ahead and wrote out a whole bunch of filler profiles to make the App seem more involved. They are all at the bottom of the Doc.

So, with that all done the core writing for the project is now completed. All that's left to do it one final big read through to edit it, and I'll likely do that tomorrow or the day after, whenever I find the time to sit down and just stare at it for a few hours.

Any additional feedback or edits anybody can provide would be awesome.

 

[null_blank]

I've added the last six sex scenes in for Hawtstuff, SexyyDaddyy, EnchantingFae, True_Power69, Rebel23, and Storm_Dragon.

In this grimmdark future, we've run all out of white space and all that remains are underscores.

 

[Evil]

The irony of someone called null_blank commenting on how prevalent underscores are...it is delicious.