Disclaimer: This is my first time ever attempting to do any sort of writing, let alone on an erotic scale, and I haven't been a long time player or contributor, however I'd like to put some writing skills to the test and get a potential idea out of my head about this game that's been NAGGING at me for about a week now!
Playing TiTs for the time I have (Maybe a few months) I found myself getting into a LOT of different kind of kinks I didn't think I would even find myself getting into, so I have the wonderful people here to thank for that! That being said, I've kinda been inspired to want to start writing something myself and give back that way since I don't quite have the pockets to be a backer... at least not at the moment.
The idea that's been tumbling through my mind lately is (as I understand this is a game for mainly smut) the actual bedding after you interact with a character just seems a bit... quick, which is fine in its own right, but to some there's a sort of gratification of landing that girl/guy that's harder to lay than others without it seeming like a chore. (Or they're just a stubborn S.O.B. xD) I also like that emotional involvement that can potentially go into a character and make the interactions more meaningful. I know its a tall order to fill that role itself, but I'm inspired by characters like Embry, Emma, and Bess as well as some other characters outside of the TiTs universe like Lithier from My Very Own Lith. I've also read some up and coming characters to be implemented like Mrs. Reasner and find some inspiration from them as well.
I wanted to introduce: Fisianna: The VERY Shy Nekomata!
Fisianna, the extremely shy Nekomata. In personality, she's of course a REALLY shy person around people she's unfamiliar with, often barely if at all speaking to people to people she doesn't know and constantly looking timid and nervous. As she warms up to someone she gets more talkative and while still sweet and shy, she much prefers talking with someone one on one rather than be in a group conversation. She'll often enjoy companionship to one she is enamored with, though she won't openly say it at first, once she sets her feelings to someone, she does become incredibly loyal towards them. She does consequently have a bit of a naivete as she doesn't have a big circle of friends other than the few you initially meet at the bar, and even then she isn't the most comfortable talking with them when they are together. She is also a highly enthusiastic video game nerd who is really good at most of them and can get uncharacteristically competitive without meaning to (especially If losing), which makes her look pouty and overly cute, similarly to what you might expect out of an anime girl
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She will be a pure female character with no intentions to convert her to change that. She is a virgin to start out with next to no sexual experience other than maybe having played with herself in her own privacy (Doesn't mean she's ignorant of such acts, though this fact may be subject to change). She is also very submissive sexually and much prefers the passion behind the sex rather than just the act of it. She'll be largely into largely vanilla sex with the PC to start. More variations might be available if I make an ex-pac for her.
I'd like to use an trust system when first meeting her, being able to be raised by generally hanging out with her at certain places in Tavros and talking to her. When her trust is maxed out, a one off scene occurs, after which date scenes unlock. I plan to have her fall in love with the PC the more trust she builds. Might be easier on the coders and a little easier writing variations of scenes. Possibly might shorten up the doc as well from what I previously thought of. Generally I'd like to make her as non-bland as possible This content will STRONGLY lean towards the romance side of things, so if you don't like potentially mushy feelings and stuff, then I'm sorry...
Hope you enjoy the readings of a novice writer!
Of course I would need the help of you lovely people for editing and keeping as much to the lore of TiTs as possible. I REALLY look forward to fleshing this character out more if everything works out! I am of course open to suggestions, ideas and criticisms to the idea as well to add to this!
I should prolly make a change log here in case repeat people drop by xD Here it is!
1/25: Skeleton copy of project made. Introductory bar scene halfway done. Fisianna appearance description done.
1/26: Bar scene finished. MAJOR structural editing of document. Much less mess and more organized! Thanks @Tacit! More grammatical fixes.
1/27: 1st plaza encounter done. Repeat encounters done. Reworked trust/affection system to trust and date scene unlock at max trust. Edited outline to reflect future plans.
1/28: Got Fisianna's basic intro talk scene done. Very minor editing and skeleton plans laid out for rest of talk scenes. Trust point distribution figured out.
1/29: Got all talk scenes done other than parents talk scene. Outlined what scenes are available based on trust and stuff.
1/30: Parents talk scene done, and its a DOOZEY! Very minor edits.
1/31: Got outline for hangout scenes done. Started on hangout scenes for arcade. Changed Deelia's name to Aya.
2/1: Britannia arcade hangout scene done.
2/2: Aya shopping hangout scene done. First date scene done.
2/3: Tarariel shopping hangout scene done. (Why it's 3 pages, I don't know xD)
2/4: Britannia shopping hangout scene done.
2/5: Max Trust scene partially done (Sorry for the cliffhanger folks! Sleep beckons!) Changed Fisi's height from 5'8 to 5'0 (Subject to change still)
2/6: Max Trust scene finished (Unless I make rejection scene)
2/7: Rejection scene done (For the sake of player choices) Movie intro partially done.
2/8: Aya movie hangout scene done. Did a tiny bit of rearranging with one part to look neater, lol.
2/9: Tarariel and Britannia movie hangout scenes done.
2/10: Sleepover scene partially done. (Sorry, majorly distracted today)
2/11: Sleepover scenes done. (And it's a loooong one!)
2/12: Second Date scene done.
2/13: Third Date scene done.
2/14: Fourth Date scene partially done. Gotta do some lore diving!
2/15: Fourth Date scene done. (Probably longest scene yet so far)
2/17: Fifth Date scene done. (Yeah, this overtakes longest scene haha)
2/19: Sixth Date scene done.
2/21: Intro to sex scenes done. Sex scene layout planned out.
2/23: Tailjob sex scene done.
2/26: Eat Her Out sex scene done.
3/4: Sixty-Nine sex scene done.
3/12: Vaginal sex scene done.
3/14: Character stats done. Everything up to Hangout scenes revised and edited.
3/15: Everything up to Britannia's shopping variant scene edited.
3/16: Everything up to Sixth date scene edited.
3/17: Everything up to the vaginal sex scene edited. (Almost done folks!)
3/18: Added [Leave] text. Project fully done!
3/20: Added reflex check for Sleepover pillow fight scene.
3/23: More editing done. Document submitted!
4/9: Rescinded submission to allow more edits to be done.
4/13: Added willpower check variant scene for 5th date scene.
4/28: Resubmitted doc.
5/23: Doc approved by FenCo!
(Should I make my change logs within my doc? I feel that might be better than bloating this one post.)
Playing TiTs for the time I have (Maybe a few months) I found myself getting into a LOT of different kind of kinks I didn't think I would even find myself getting into, so I have the wonderful people here to thank for that! That being said, I've kinda been inspired to want to start writing something myself and give back that way since I don't quite have the pockets to be a backer... at least not at the moment.
The idea that's been tumbling through my mind lately is (as I understand this is a game for mainly smut) the actual bedding after you interact with a character just seems a bit... quick, which is fine in its own right, but to some there's a sort of gratification of landing that girl/guy that's harder to lay than others without it seeming like a chore. (Or they're just a stubborn S.O.B. xD) I also like that emotional involvement that can potentially go into a character and make the interactions more meaningful. I know its a tall order to fill that role itself, but I'm inspired by characters like Embry, Emma, and Bess as well as some other characters outside of the TiTs universe like Lithier from My Very Own Lith. I've also read some up and coming characters to be implemented like Mrs. Reasner and find some inspiration from them as well.
I wanted to introduce: Fisianna: The VERY Shy Nekomata!
Fisianna, the extremely shy Nekomata. In personality, she's of course a REALLY shy person around people she's unfamiliar with, often barely if at all speaking to people to people she doesn't know and constantly looking timid and nervous. As she warms up to someone she gets more talkative and while still sweet and shy, she much prefers talking with someone one on one rather than be in a group conversation. She'll often enjoy companionship to one she is enamored with, though she won't openly say it at first, once she sets her feelings to someone, she does become incredibly loyal towards them. She does consequently have a bit of a naivete as she doesn't have a big circle of friends other than the few you initially meet at the bar, and even then she isn't the most comfortable talking with them when they are together. She is also a highly enthusiastic video game nerd who is really good at most of them and can get uncharacteristically competitive without meaning to (especially If losing), which makes her look pouty and overly cute, similarly to what you might expect out of an anime girl
.She will be a pure female character with no intentions to convert her to change that. She is a virgin to start out with next to no sexual experience other than maybe having played with herself in her own privacy (Doesn't mean she's ignorant of such acts, though this fact may be subject to change). She is also very submissive sexually and much prefers the passion behind the sex rather than just the act of it. She'll be largely into largely vanilla sex with the PC to start. More variations might be available if I make an ex-pac for her.
I'd like to use an trust system when first meeting her, being able to be raised by generally hanging out with her at certain places in Tavros and talking to her. When her trust is maxed out, a one off scene occurs, after which date scenes unlock. I plan to have her fall in love with the PC the more trust she builds. Might be easier on the coders and a little easier writing variations of scenes. Possibly might shorten up the doc as well from what I previously thought of. Generally I'd like to make her as non-bland as possible
This content will STRONGLY lean towards the romance side of things, so if you don't like potentially mushy feelings and stuff, then I'm sorry... Hope you enjoy the readings of a novice writer!
Of course I would need the help of you lovely people for editing and keeping as much to the lore of TiTs as possible. I REALLY look forward to fleshing this character out more if everything works out! I am of course open to suggestions, ideas and criticisms to the idea as well to add to this!
I should prolly make a change log here in case repeat people drop by xD Here it is!
1/25: Skeleton copy of project made. Introductory bar scene halfway done. Fisianna appearance description done.
1/26: Bar scene finished. MAJOR structural editing of document. Much less mess and more organized! Thanks @Tacit! More grammatical fixes.
1/27: 1st plaza encounter done. Repeat encounters done. Reworked trust/affection system to trust and date scene unlock at max trust. Edited outline to reflect future plans.
1/28: Got Fisianna's basic intro talk scene done. Very minor editing and skeleton plans laid out for rest of talk scenes. Trust point distribution figured out.
1/29: Got all talk scenes done other than parents talk scene. Outlined what scenes are available based on trust and stuff.
1/30: Parents talk scene done, and its a DOOZEY! Very minor edits.
1/31: Got outline for hangout scenes done. Started on hangout scenes for arcade. Changed Deelia's name to Aya.
2/1: Britannia arcade hangout scene done.
2/2: Aya shopping hangout scene done. First date scene done.
2/3: Tarariel shopping hangout scene done. (Why it's 3 pages, I don't know xD)
2/4: Britannia shopping hangout scene done.
2/5: Max Trust scene partially done (Sorry for the cliffhanger folks! Sleep beckons!) Changed Fisi's height from 5'8 to 5'0 (Subject to change still)
2/6: Max Trust scene finished (Unless I make rejection scene)
2/7: Rejection scene done (For the sake of player choices) Movie intro partially done.
2/8: Aya movie hangout scene done. Did a tiny bit of rearranging with one part to look neater, lol.
2/9: Tarariel and Britannia movie hangout scenes done.
2/10: Sleepover scene partially done. (Sorry, majorly distracted today
)2/11: Sleepover scenes done. (And it's a loooong one!)
2/12: Second Date scene done.
2/13: Third Date scene done.
2/14: Fourth Date scene partially done. Gotta do some lore diving!
2/15: Fourth Date scene done. (Probably longest scene yet so far)
2/17: Fifth Date scene done. (Yeah, this overtakes longest scene haha)
2/19: Sixth Date scene done.
2/21: Intro to sex scenes done. Sex scene layout planned out.
2/23: Tailjob sex scene done.
2/26: Eat Her Out sex scene done.
3/4: Sixty-Nine sex scene done.
3/12: Vaginal sex scene done.
3/14: Character stats done. Everything up to Hangout scenes revised and edited.
3/15: Everything up to Britannia's shopping variant scene edited.
3/16: Everything up to Sixth date scene edited.
3/17: Everything up to the vaginal sex scene edited. (Almost done folks!)
3/18: Added [Leave] text. Project fully done!
3/20: Added reflex check for Sleepover pillow fight scene.
3/23: More editing done. Document submitted!
4/9: Rescinded submission to allow more edits to be done.
4/13: Added willpower check variant scene for 5th date scene.
4/28: Resubmitted doc.
5/23: Doc approved by FenCo!
(Should I make my change logs within my doc? I feel that might be better than bloating this one post.)
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This isn't a cowgirl, there's no reason to bully her!
I also rehashed my original idea of a trust AND an affection system to just a trust system that unlocks talk and hangout scenes and date scene unlocks when it is maxed, with a first kiss steal one-off scene! First sex scene would happen after going through a certain amount of date scenes, depends how many I make. Might make things easier on the coders, and on me for making scene variations based on trust 
About 8700 words so far and I'm not even done ALL the talk scenes, and there's still the hangout scenes, date scenes and sex scenes, not to mention the max trust scene. The max trust scene and hangout scenes might wind up being smallish anyways, but the date scenes and sex scenes could take up quite a bit more room. I'm definitely inspired since I caught up on my sleep but I wasn't expecting this to be as big as it is, despite me keeping some stuff to a minimum. Then again, Fisi's pretty backstory driven so... Either way, hope you enjoy the next little bit I added, and feel free to comment where necessary!