Raga of Matri

How the hell did I spend several months on this project? Meet Raga of Matri

So, here's a tomboy bruiser space oni for Myrellion. She's small, petite, and hits like a truck. She sees the PC as competition, so when she encounters the PC in the caverns as a random encounter, she'll take him for a ride.

The good news is that she's a pretty good winner--and still gives the PC some loot even if she wins.

Her personality is totally "bro," and she uses the term as well as "dude" in her sentences. 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12XVg3jsjqoyvYKQ4PueGDErmygTPfT0-omJ6-Gqps9M/edit?usp=sharing

Fetishes Covered:

Wrestling for Dominance

Petite

Muscles

Headfloof

Tsundere

Tomboy

I'm absolutely shit on coding and numbers, so I'd welcome input on that.

 

[Karretch]

arent you supposed to post this on the submission thread?

This is an event. It's in the event submission board. ???

 

This is an event. It's in the event submission board. ???

Wait ... so I'm okay? I'm sorry. This is my first time on the new boards.

 

[Karretch]

Wait ... so I'm okay? I'm sorry. This is my first time on the new boards.

I'd say you are. It's not a codex only doc, which would go in the codex thread in ideas.

 

[Karretch]

Got up to the win scenes, suggest-fixed the few typos I could see, and left a couple comments. I'll finish after I sleep. Loving her characterization. I chuckled and laughed so far.

 

[Savin]

Ma'am, if you please. ^_^  And do I have to move my post elsewhere?

No, it's in the right place.

 

[Nik_van_Rijn]

Read through the doc, left some suggestions. Loving it so far, despite not being a major fan of short-stack characters or tsunderes.

Spoiler

Nice avatar. InCase's works are pure boss sauce.

 

Man alive, thank you so much to Philo and Bliz for going through this and correcting all of my dumbass mistakes. ^_^  It gives me a lot of encouragement to finish polishing her up. (And I'm totally using all of your feedback and corrections.)

 

[PyrateHyena]

Just wanna say I love what I've read so far. Unsure if I wanna spoil the rest for me.

 

[EmperorG]

Gonna have to agree with the other folks here and say I'm liking what I see, would love to see more of both Raga and her species. Heck a quest to help her get some tech as a way to help her out would also be a nice addition later on.

 

[Oilwood]

I think she sounds interesting, small but spunky. Hope to see her implemented one day

 

[TFMaster]

I think she sounds interesting, small but spunky. Hope to see her implemented one day

Man this is one extreme case of Necromancy! You must be a powerful Necromancer indeed if you can revive something as dead as this!

 

[Evil]

In other words, the last update was from 3 years ago. Its not happening and you should have realised that by how far back you had to go in the archives to find this.

 

[Lkynmbr24]

Lel this is so old, clicking on the profile pic doesn't even give a name of the user or anything! XD

 

[Alabaster Chimes]

Sigh

If your gonna Necro a thread, at least Necro the right fucking one....

https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/submitted-raga-of-matri-space-oni-tsundere.2888/

Frogapus's Resident Space Oni

 

[Frogapus]

Also, she's benched. Her original version strayed too close to lolicon, so she's permabanned.