A couple typos when Miera is getting inspected by Astrida:
Then there's the matter of be being particularly adept as transmutation
When rubbing her tummy when she's visibly pregnant:
"You stay any longer, Zach, and I might not be responsible for what I do next. It's bad enough that Senja knows how weak I am just behind my nipples, but you, you go and
Putting all of her pregnant weight behind her, Meira pushes you towards the door. Even at this distance, you can feel the heat rising from her body; she wasn't kidding when she said she was this close from jumping your bones. It's not like she could actually make you leave should you decide to force the issue, but...
No closing quote and the italics continue into the action.
When asking about her being milky:
If you were to ask for something that %'gets to me', well, it would be the old junk and tackle, even if I keep them out of the way most times.
Then there's the matter of be being particularly adept as transmutation
When rubbing her tummy when she's visibly pregnant:
"You stay any longer, Zach, and I might not be responsible for what I do next. It's bad enough that Senja knows how weak I am just behind my nipples, but you, you go and
Putting all of her pregnant weight behind her, Meira pushes you towards the door. Even at this distance, you can feel the heat rising from her body; she wasn't kidding when she said she was this close from jumping your bones. It's not like she could actually make you leave should you decide to force the issue, but...
No closing quote and the italics continue into the action.
When asking about her being milky:
If you were to ask for something that %'gets to me', well, it would be the old junk and tackle, even if I keep them out of the way most times.
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