[looking for editors, WIP] Bat TF

[lopbat]

Hello FenCo forums, I'm longtime-lurker lopbat and I haven't used gdocs for writing in roughly 10 years.

I've wanted a bat tf since the original CoC and I finally decided to get off my butt and get to writing it (no shade to the CoC2 bat tf, I just don't play it enough to enjoy the fact that there's one in there). It's relatively straightforward, with three options (vampire bat, fruit bat, and a 'generic' blend of the two) and a race perk for vampire bats.
I was able to figure out some of the parser stuff myself using the doc, but a lot of the more complex stuff is kind of beyond me so if I'm meant to do that on my own I'd appreciate any help/critique knowledgeable folk can give! The majority of the actual writing I had in mind is done, so if it needs something else I didn't think of I can always add that in.
The template is kind of thin on details re: TF items so things might not be where they're supposed to be in the doc itself; I need some help with that as well, if possible.

Here it is.

EDIT: Should this be in the ideas forum or here? i put it here because I already have the outline, but I'm realizing I might have made a mistake.

 

[voltfintrout]

Hi I know it's been like two months and I don't know that much about the parser but I'm going through and commenting your google doc. (That's a lot of pages this is gonna take a while.)

Edit: Got halfway through but ran out of time. A big thing to look our for with parser stuff is double spacing/lack of spacing. Here's an example from the parser documentation.

She admires {the straining bulge in your [pc.crotchCover]/your straining bulge}.

This will render as either:
She admires the straining bulge in your pants.
She admires your straining bulge.

However, if there's also spaces after the opening curly bracket or after the forward slash like so:

She admires { the straining bulge in your [pc.crotchCover] / your straining bulge}.

Then it will render as:
She admires the straining bulge in your [pc.crotchCover] .
She admires your straining bulge.

 

[lopbat]

I'm nearly done with the TF text as it stands, thanks to editing help from some anons + @voltfintrout! I just finished up the cumpire perk gain text, which has been the major delay (aside from some RL stuff getting me very much out of the writing mood). All that's left is the flexibility perk text, the face tf and some description stuff!