[looking for editors, WIP] Bat TF

[lopbat]

Hello FenCo forums, I'm longtime-lurker lopbat and I haven't used gdocs for writing in roughly 10 years.

I've wanted a bat tf since the original CoC and I finally decided to get off my butt and get to writing it (no shade to the CoC2 bat tf, I just don't play it enough to enjoy the fact that there's one in there). It's relatively straightforward, with three options (vampire bat, fruit bat, and a 'generic' blend of the two) and a race perk for vampire bats.
I was able to figure out some of the parser stuff myself using the doc, but a lot of the more complex stuff is kind of beyond me so if I'm meant to do that on my own I'd appreciate any help/critique knowledgeable folk can give! The majority of the actual writing I had in mind is done, so if it needs something else I didn't think of I can always add that in.
The template is kind of thin on details re: TF items so things might not be where they're supposed to be in the doc itself; I need some help with that as well, if possible.

Here it is.

EDIT: Should this be in the ideas forum or here? i put it here because I already have the outline, but I'm realizing I might have made a mistake.

 

[voltfintrout]

Hi I know it's been like two months and I don't know that much about the parser but I'm going through and commenting your google doc. (That's a lot of pages this is gonna take a while.)

Edit: Got halfway through but ran out of time. A big thing to look our for with parser stuff is double spacing/lack of spacing. Here's an example from the parser documentation.

She admires {the straining bulge in your [pc.crotchCover]/your straining bulge}.

This will render as either:
She admires the straining bulge in your pants.
She admires your straining bulge.

However, if there's also spaces after the opening curly bracket or after the forward slash like so:

She admires { the straining bulge in your [pc.crotchCover] / your straining bulge}.

Then it will render as:
She admires the straining bulge in your [pc.crotchCover] .
She admires your straining bulge.