[Looking for editors before submission]Gladys, the moothicore dancer

[Magenta Needle]

Hello again, my desires lead me to write this small piece of content
I would gladly appreciate some feedback, especially with the phrasing

Gladys, the Moothicore Dancer

Gladys, the Moothicore Dancer by Magenta Needle Overview Art indications Encounter Appearance Talk Herself The Bar Dance Ask Dance Sex Ride Her Tailcunt Fun Nursing Handjob Take Her Anal Dominate Her Leave Overview Gladys is a heavily transformed dancer working at the Ember's Taphouse ...

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[Greyfox643]

I enjoyed everything I've read so far. But I'm always biased to anything with nursing_handjob scenes in it.

 

[JustSomeGuy]

Interesting can't wait to see where it goes.

 

[Magenta Needle]

If it goes like my TiTS project, 3000+ punctuation and grammar edits required and maybe a design change since Gladys's backstory has some nasty bits. I might also have to alter how her "condition" is carried through the text.

 

[Dreamer44]

Hello again, my desires lead me to write this small piece of content
I would gladly appreciate some feedback, especially with the phrasing

Gladys, the Moothicore Dancer

Gladys, the Moothicore Dancer by Magenta Needle Overview Art indications Encounter Appearance Talk Herself The Bar Dance Ask Dance Sex Ride Her Tailcunt Fun Nursing Handjob Take Her Anal Dominate Her Leave Overview Gladys is a heavily transformed dancer working at the Ember's Taphouse ...

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Spoiler

Don't forget to add corruption gain when sexing her.