[Looking for editors before submission]Gladys, the moothicore dancer

[Magenta Needle]

Hello again, my desires lead me to write this small piece of content
I would gladly appreciate some feedback, especially with the phrasing

Gladys, the Moothicore Dancer

docs.google.com

 

[Greyfox643]

I enjoyed everything I've read so far. But I'm always biased to anything with nursing_handjob scenes in it.

 

[JustSomeGuy]

Interesting can't wait to see where it goes.

 

[Magenta Needle]

If it goes like my TiTS project, 3000+ punctuation and grammar edits required and maybe a design change since Gladys's backstory has some nasty bits. I might also have to alter how her "condition" is carried through the text.

 

[Dreamer44]

Hello again, my desires lead me to write this small piece of content
I would gladly appreciate some feedback, especially with the phrasing

Gladys, the Moothicore Dancer

docs.google.com

Spoiler

Don't forget to add corruption gain when sexing her.