Hello. First time posting here. Here's the link to the G-doc, and then I'll get to explaining why you should/shouldn't cringe at this:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f5RtepmHTc0mmtDrOcku2vIhCOOysBMPb5gqNgmlxhw
This picks up if Steele has chosen to disable incest with the kips for a prolonged period. Contrary to what Frosty initially tells you, this does create tension within your wyrmling family and your eldest daughter psionically assaults you over it. Assuming that Steele does not just give in to her daughter, a slight disagreement in what constitutes proper disciplinary action between you and Frosty opens up the option to take your eldest kip (who I will call Eki for short) as a crew member.
As this is predicated on Steele not being interested in incest, there are no direct sex scenes between Steele and Eki (not to say there never will be, just that they aren't planned). Instead, it's a bunch psionic molestation that randomly intrudes as Eki tries to win her Qal over. The ultimate goal is not to get in with your daughter (I mean, if you want to pursue Bad Ends, they will be there), but to find someone other than you for her to direct her affections toward.
Also, eventually I want to give Steele motivation to burn the galaxy down because someone messed with one of Steele's kids, because I want to have the opportunity for Steele to be something other than a neglectful (or lustful) parent.
For now, this content focuses on getting Eki onto the ship and giving you some base content once she's there.
I've read up on what FW content I could find and am aware that the eldest had to be toned down because of certain TOS concerns. Looking at comparisons between B's original and edited version, I'm fairly confident that I have addressed that issue in my design guide.
Please savage my work. My inner editor has been on vacation and so I have indulged many of my worst habits. I fully expect a critical beating. This is very much a WIP, I'm probably about 20-25% complete, but it wouldn't make sense for me to write everything and then get told that this is all a terrible idea and I should feel bad for trying. I've had fun writing what I have.
If, instead, you like where this is going and the writing works, I'm all up for more ideas.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f5RtepmHTc0mmtDrOcku2vIhCOOysBMPb5gqNgmlxhw
This picks up if Steele has chosen to disable incest with the kips for a prolonged period. Contrary to what Frosty initially tells you, this does create tension within your wyrmling family and your eldest daughter psionically assaults you over it. Assuming that Steele does not just give in to her daughter, a slight disagreement in what constitutes proper disciplinary action between you and Frosty opens up the option to take your eldest kip (who I will call Eki for short) as a crew member.
As this is predicated on Steele not being interested in incest, there are no direct sex scenes between Steele and Eki (not to say there never will be, just that they aren't planned). Instead, it's a bunch psionic molestation that randomly intrudes as Eki tries to win her Qal over. The ultimate goal is not to get in with your daughter (I mean, if you want to pursue Bad Ends, they will be there), but to find someone other than you for her to direct her affections toward.
Also, eventually I want to give Steele motivation to burn the galaxy down because someone messed with one of Steele's kids, because I want to have the opportunity for Steele to be something other than a neglectful (or lustful) parent.
For now, this content focuses on getting Eki onto the ship and giving you some base content once she's there.
I've read up on what FW content I could find and am aware that the eldest had to be toned down because of certain TOS concerns. Looking at comparisons between B's original and edited version, I'm fairly confident that I have addressed that issue in my design guide.
Please savage my work. My inner editor has been on vacation and so I have indulged many of my worst habits. I fully expect a critical beating. This is very much a WIP, I'm probably about 20-25% complete, but it wouldn't make sense for me to write everything and then get told that this is all a terrible idea and I should feel bad for trying. I've had fun writing what I have.
If, instead, you like where this is going and the writing works, I'm all up for more ideas.