I'm surprised I legit forgot about these posts, gimme a tic.
nice. my only question is where did the kid's name come from if Mirrin is the mother. i can see it if you both have girls so another name is required but if only Mirrin has a kid it seems odd for the name change when she was so specific about names, perhaps a topic of discussion during her pregnancy before she gives birth
It's mostly her guessing names with Torri being her first choice for a female (so whoever get's pregnant, Torri is always the first child regardless). Einar would've been the first choice for a male but I just liked the idea of female-pseudo-twins more for some reason.
I had a sort of interesting thought when reading the "live" choice for the second try at having kids. Would it be possible that if Steele has 2 Wombs, Mirrin could make Steele have both of the kids using both of her dicks at the same time? Or one after the other just like in the scene originally but instead of in 1 vagina, putting a load in each of them? I dont recall very many double dick on double vagina scenes beside Kelly on mhen'ga. Well that's just my little idea. I really love the character you've written and the work you've done so far was a wonderful read. Thank you!
There'll probably be a sex scene where I'll take it into account, maybe even make it exclusive. However, writing double preg for one person means adding in so much more stuff to the doc and over-complicating the flow of the pregnanciiiiies, aaaaagh. I've had a very solid idea of two kids max with Mirrin and she always has had to have one baby in her in that case, I don't really want to keep spiralling the goals out of place. Thanks for the support tho!
You know, if your working on Mirrin anyway, I have a suggestion:
When she invites you to her appartment the first time, it consists of something like 5 screens without any player input (aside from hitting "next"). It would be nice if somewhere in there would be a button to cancel the squence, even if its just "Leave" or "I dont have time right now" button and her story doenst proceed untill the PC goes with her.
Because if the scene is not your cup of tea, you can never talk to her again without triggering it.
Addressing this was the first thing I did in the doc, that's what most of the first 5k is dedicated to. Pretty much in line with what everyone wanted plus remains open any time if you *do* want to make the relationship sexual.