[Implemented!] Expanded Milodan War Alpha Content!

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Updated Eitan with 2,000 words! In this update, you two start fuckin'.

There's still a lot of work to be done, and it's all going to be sex stuff for the next little while! If you want to keep up with all the juicy content, head on over to my Patreon and toss me a fiver!
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Updated with 2,000 words! This is pretty much just him fucking you. Being both an alpha and a Milodan, Eitan is an aggressive lover and isn't satisfied with blowing just one load: as a result, there's some minor cumflation in this scene, with the PC on the receiving end, which is pretty rare for this game.
His balls clench up against you, dragging their fur across the broad of your ass, and you can feel every surging pump of his Milodan cum driving up through his thick, meaty cock and into your body. It takes you a moment to register just how expansive the first load is: you can feel his cum building up inside you, trapped by your body and his knot, filling all those little spots that his behemoth of a cock couldn’t reach. By the second load, your body feels tight and hot, strained by the absolute totality of his output. Your first thought was that he’s just pent up, and this is the load he’s been saving for a while – but what if it isn’t? What if Eitan cums this much regularly?
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How much is Eitan gonna be able to take when he's bottoming? I noticed on the war alpha stat file that his capacity is waaaaaaay lower than the other milodan males during the siege (despite them also being described a virgins, anally) and was curious whether that's legit or just, like, he was based off a template and that wasn't changed because he had no scenes.



I just wanna know whether to stock up on condensol.
 
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How much is Eitan gonna be able to take when he's bottoming? I noticed on the war alpha stat file that his capacity is waaaaaaay lower than the other milodan males during the siege (despite them also being described a virgins, anally) and was curious whether that's legit or just, like, he was based off a template and that wasn't changed because he had no scenes.



I just wanna know whether to stock up on condensol.
Eitan only bottoms like that when he loses the spar

Losers dont get condensol
 
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Updated Eitan with 2,000 words! This covers most of, but does not complete, the scene where you suck him off. There's still about 400-500 words left in the scene to go. Like before, will feature some minor cumflation, and it also has oral knotting if you have Snakebyte.
“I’ll need more than a pair of hands, [pc.name] Steele,” he says, his voice coming out as a low growl – it almost sounds menacing, although that may just be the positions you two are in and you being totally exposed and naked beneath him. “If you’re so enamored with me, then I won’t mind giving you a closer look for our session.”

You hardly register the words, honestly, but some unconscious part of you acquiesces. You feel his body move and shuffle before you see it; his fur draws along your body, and you feel his bulging muscles grind against you as he crawls forward, drawing his body along yours.

Your eyes are level with his chest, then your nose draws a line down his two columns of abs – and then you’re wetly jabbed in the chin by his leaking cock, the nubs and prickles on his spaded head tickling at your [pc.skinFurScales]. His dick stiffly rubs its way up your cheek before coming to rest against your nose, the point of his cock above your eye, and the bulge of his knot against your [pc.lips].
{Snakebyte:There aren’t a lot of cocks in the world that can <i>really</i> satisfy your ribbed, erogenous throat, and Eitan is one of the rare few that can accomplish the task. You eagerly yawn your mouth wider, inviting him to deepthroat you as far as he can; Eitan, still drunk on his own dominant performance, pays little heed to your invite and fucks your mouth at his own pace. Your patience is rewarded, and soon, he’s down to the knot, that bulbous flesh battering harshly against your [pc.lips] with every thrust. If you can just get your mouth a bit wider, you’ll be able to take that, too….}
I might be putting Eitan off for a bit of a breather. I should know by tomorrow.
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Updated Eitan with 2,000 words! This completes the scene where you suck him off, and it gets a fair chunk of the way into the scene where he goes down on you. That scene will have a number of variances depending on if you have a vajayjay or not.
Once he’s satisfied that he’s gotten you nice and <i>warmed up</i>, he withdraws from your [pc.vagina], teasingly slowly, his eyes on you and your reaction the whole time. You can’t help but bite into your lower lip at the sight of him and the feel of his finger exiting you – and when he brings his hand up to his mouth to suck his finger dry, you’re suddenly on the edge of your patience, and you’re about to yell at him to get started already.

Eitan hears your unspoken command loud and clear, but, even despite that, he does what you don’t expect: he {cock:lifts your [pc.cock]{balls: and [pc.balls]} out of the way, places his right hand on your stomach, and he }shoves his nose right into your wet box, sinking his face down to the whiskers inside you. You jump in surprise at the sudden feel of his fat, stout nose crammed right up your junk, and your [pc.skinFurScales] shiver when you feel the air rush over your vulva as he takes a <i>huge</i>, deep breath through his nose, taking in as much of your bitch-in-heat scent as he can in a single go.
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I noticed on the war alpha stat file that his capacity is waaaaaaay lower than the other milodan males during the siege (despite them also being described a virgins, anally) and was curious whether that's legit or just, like, he was based off a template and that wasn't changed because he had no scenes.
Blame the awesome power of a Milodan Alpha's gluteus maximus.
 

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Updated with 2,000 words! This finishes off the scene where Eitan goes down on you if you have a vagina, and it gets a big chunk of the way into him going down on you if you don't have a vagina. He'll always prefer to eat out boxes, so writing his girl/herm scene was easier, but his dick-sucking scene requires a bit more imagination.
There’s a sense of… calm <i>power</i> to the way he’s eating you out. He spears in; makes a complete pass inside you, like he’s a dog trying to lick the inside of a peanut butter jar clean; then twists and withdraws before starting again. He’s so <i>thorough;</i> his motions are so <i>deep;</i> the coil of his tongue inside you has you subconsciously shifting your [pc.hips] in the same direction. Eitan puts more emphasis on the totality of a single pass of his tongue inside your cunt, rather than the speed: an average lover going at an average speed could get in three or four licks in the time it takes for him to do one, but they also wouldn’t go half as deep, or fill you half as full.
Finally, after torturing you with pleasure for a short eternity, he reaches your spire{12 inches or more:, although he had to shuffle himself forward to better sit on his knees to align himself with your length}. The tip of your [pc.cockHead] pokes into the inside of his top lip, showing you his normally-hidden razor-sharp teeth. You freeze – your dick is awfully close to all of that sharpness – but if you didn’t trust Eitan to handle himself around your equipment, it’s a bit too late to stop now. Besides… based on his half-lustful, half-entertained expression, and the way his hot breath sharply exhales around your tool, he found your reaction amusing.
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Updated with 2,000 words! This finishes off the scene where he goes down on you. It has some variants based on the length of your dick and the quantity of cum you can produce. It also makes some headway into the aftercare scene, where he snuggles up to you and keeps you warm and clean after such a rough bout of lovemaking - he knows he can be a bit of a handful, so the least he can do is big spoon you.
When your first gout of [pc.cum] rushes up your shaft, it rides against the inside of his cheek before billowing against the back of his throat. {a shitload:That turns out to be a mistake, given your output: his eyes widen and he leans back, trying to put some distance between you and your geyser of a cock, but it’s too late to protect his unsuspecting throat from the first thick, creamy gout of your [pc.cum], and he swallows the first mouthful. Eitan’s lips can’t close around you, so what doesn’t get caught in his bloated cheeks – and that’s already more than a lot – backwashes against your bare pelvis and dribbles down his chin, sticking to the fur on his neck and chest. Eitan almost looks like he’s panicking: he’s more of a cuntlicker than he is a cocksucker, and he has no experience dealing with an output like yours. Should he try to swallow more? Should he back out? Whether it’s because of his indecision, or because he’s just a man’s man, he keeps you in his jaw, pumping away at his poor, overwhelmed throat.}
When you come to, you’re warm as could be, and you feel tight all over. You thought you were only out for a moment – just a blink of an eye, really – but you must have been knocked unconscious from Eitan and his highly-demanding lovemaking. The Milodan fuck like machines: just one round isn’t enough to satisfy even their runts of the litter, and to think that you just bed the alpha of a whole tribe…!

On top of the heat and the constriction, you feel something rough drag across your {[pc.hair]}{bald scalp. It doesn’t hurt – on the contrary, it almost feels like a gentle scratch on your skin, like you’re getting an itch}. It’s a struggle to adjust yourself to see what it is, but when you move against your bindings, you realize that you’re actually trapped up against Eitan’s thick, muscular body, and the things keeping you still are his arms and legs wrapped around your body, spooning you to him.

“Hmm,” he hums, lifting his head to get a better look at your face. “Good morning, [pc.name] Steele.”
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Sorry for the minor hiatus! I normally write at "hatefuck o'clock," as my friend put it, and my sleep schedule reset on me recently, which is great for my personal health but bad for my productivity.
To make up for it, I've updated Eitan with 3,500 words! This completes his Aftercare scene; it does some general cleaning and prepping for sparring against him, including three of the four possible win conditions (win and lose, with HP or Lust); and it gets a fair chunk of the way into the scene where you Top Him.
Still… as sexy as the idea is of you lying on your back, underneath the brick wall that is Eitan’s body, as he thrusts into you again and again, panting with exertion, your name whispering from his lips, while your body melds to the shape of his cock, until it all comes to a sudden head – right, as you were thinking, as sexy as that all might be, you’d like to take this in a different direction. If Eitan had his way, he’d fuck you into the cushions, all strength and ferocity but no grace. You’re not done admiring his body with your hands.
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I've thought this whole time that "Top him" was a scene where you put it in his butt. Riding is usually called power bottoming, at least where I'm from, so I was confused. Either way, very well done. Do you put it in his ass if you beat him in the spar?
 
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Why is called "bottoming" if you're on top? It's the wrong direction.
Typically bottoming just means you're receiving penetration, regardless of actual position. People wouldn't say "I'm a top" if they literally just meant they were physically above their partner all the time. In the context of no penetration being in the equation, top and bottom are often shorthand for dominance. The scene in question very much involves a penis, a penis Steele is taking. It's dominant bottoming, so it's technically both topping and bottoming, but bottoming is generally more accurate.
 

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I could change the name of the scene to "Ride Him," if that would help?


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Nice! And honestly that would probably be for the best. That's the standard title for riding scenes. Honestly when it comes to the buttons for scenes I think people want to know what their options are at a glance, and while "Top him" isn't technically wrong, ride him can't be misconstrued really. I'm just worried if it's ambiguous people might get confused like I was and give up their AV by accident or something. This weird nitpick aside, you're doing really good work!
 

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Maybe "Dom Ride" would work, to indicate that you are riding him and not doing it in a submissive manner? Just to clarify both aspects of the scene
 
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Updated with 2,200 words! This finishes, and retitles, the scene to [=Ride Him=], and it gets a chunk of the way through recruiting him.
Eitan grunts once, his own body clenching and curling around yours: his hands go to the swell of your [pc.ass] and his thighs reach up and pinch your [pc.hips], constricting you in the solid mass of muscle that is his body. And what comes next is a load that only the alpha of the Milodan would be capable of outputting:

As unbelievable as it is, you feel his shaft get even more bloated inside you, before you feel a hot gush of his cum coat your insides. The first shot alone would put the average man’s whole load to shame: you can feel your {vag:womb stretch and pull at your body, satiated enough with the first offering, but Eitan has so much more to give. The next pulse along his cock has your own [pc.belly] round out just beneath your navel, and with his knot tied to you so tightly, there’s nowhere for his cum to go but straight to your eggs}{ass:stomach fill up and stretch against your body; a single load of that down your throat would have been enough for a proper meal, and he has so many more to give you. The second shot fills you more thoroughly, bloating your [pc.belly] until there’s a bit of paunch around your navel, sloshing with his cum and with nowhere to go with that thick knot tying you both so tightly}. And with the third….
There isn't a whole lot left to do! Three sex scenes for the sparring (one for each of the PC's possible sexes if they win, and one if they lose), finishing the recruitment talk, and ideally at least one or two talk scenes, just so he doesn't exist purely as a sex machine.

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Updated with 2,000 words! This completes the scene where you recruit him and does some basic groundwork for talking with him while he's a crewmate. It's nothing terribly substantial, but it gets us moving!
He pulls out of the doorway and stands beside you in the cramped hallway, his massive body contorting to the side just to fit. “So,” he drones, “what happens next?”

For him? Not a lot – he just stands by and waits for your further instruction. He has your permission to wander the ship as he likes, but not your permission to leave it. If he doesn’t think he should touch something, then he <i>should not</i> touch it. Other than that… it’s just a bit of waiting.

“May I touch you?” he asks.

The question takes you aback. “Uh,” you stutter, “yes?”

With your permission, he steps into you and wraps you in his giant arms, squeezing you to his chest. “My experience with Pyrite did not end well. I will not waste this opportunity a second time, [pc.name] Steele,” he says, holding you against his fluffy, muscular chest.

You weren’t expecting that, but far be it from you to turn down a hug from someone as large, fluffy, and firm as Eitan is. You reciprocate the hug as best as you can, worming your arms out from underneath him, and wrapping them around his ribs, pulling him into you.

It turns out, Eitan’s a good hugger. His size makes it easy for him. When he disengages and heads into his own quarters, it air of your ship feels just a bit cooler.

<b>Eitan is now your crewmate!</b>
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Updated with 2,000 words! This completes the scene where you recruit him and does some basic groundwork for talking with him while he's a crewmate. It's nothing terribly substantial, but it gets us moving!

I'm going to keep signing my posts by talking about my Patreon until you sub to it, damn you!
Huh...I thought he was gonna be stuck on Uveto's cold wasteland. Unlike B's Patreon, Its turned into quite a Oasis in recent times.
 

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Updated with 2,000 words! This covers two new talking topics: one where Eitan explains what it means for a Milodan to be 'uplifted,' and the other that touches on the Milodan culture's approach to sex. This being a porn game, the answer is "they have lots of it and they aren't shy about it."
Given that there’s only one alpha in the tribe, you ask him what his family thinks about him constantly fucking all the time. Surely it must be difficult for them to put up with, too.

“Now</i> that <i>is a difficult question to answer,” he says, pointing a finger at you. “I have two sisters, and my mother was the alpha of the tribe before me. Like I said, the alpha of the tribe is one of the most sexually desirable partners, and that doesn’t exclude family. An alpha mating with his or her siblings is… discouraged, but it’s not exactly forbidden.”

You wave your hands and tell Eitan to stop for a moment. Milodan culture <i>doesn’t</i> forbid incest? They only ‘discourage’ it?

“That’s right,” he answers. “You’d think the offspring of an alpha mating with each other would produce a stronger alpha than any generation before it, but that’s… not always the case. Which is why it’s discouraged. But, when you’re in a heat, or a rut, and you’re living with the most desirable mate in the tribe… sometimes, you can’t help yourself.”

Well, that’s… information that you have now.

But still, you have to ask Eitan one last question, and you steel yourself for the answer. He mentioned that he has two sisters. Has he ever… had sex with either?

“No,” he responds simply.

{PC is Mischievous:You, getting some courage at that brisk answer, ask if the thought’s ever crossed his mind.

“Maybe once or twice,” he admits slyly.}

Okay, that’s enough questioning for you.
One future expack I might be doing for Eitan is where you have a threesome with him and his sister, so this is futureproofing for that.

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One future expack I might be doing for Eitan is where you have a threesome with him and his sister, so this is futureproofing for that.

But I thought there was this whole thing against incest, and that’s why content had to be removed or changed?
 

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But I thought there was this whole thing against incest, and that’s why content had to be removed or changed?
I was confused to see that too, especially because it doesn't really seem to be a cultural aspect that has any precedent. It really just depends on how it goes down. If he like, fucks his sister in the threesome that's probably not okay. If they're both doing stuff to Steele at the same time, it probably flies.
 

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Inter-generational incest is banned (parent-child, aunt-nephew, etc). Same-generation incest is still on the table. Obviously it's going to be run past Fen first.
 

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If that is the case, then why did Kally and Kiro got changed to step sisters? Did the rule get softer later on?