[Implemented!] Expanded Milodan War Alpha Content!

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Sorry for the late update, but I've updated Eitan with 2,000 words! Here, he talks about his family. I've given him a mom, a dad, and two sisters: his sisters both live in different tribes; his dad is the tribe's caretaker, healing wounds and dressing food and the like; and his mom was actually the previous Alpha, which is something that Eitan has some issues with.
“They</i> revered <i>her, [pc.name] Steele. Male or female, betrothed or not – going from Alpha of the tribe to priestess of the tribe has a way of giving you a</i> reputation. <i>One that her son couldn’t hope to match.”

From the sounds of things, Eitan resents his mother for being popular, and he hasn’t been able to live up to her legacy. You doubt he’d want to be named ‘priestess’ himself, so you don’t mention it. You imply that she must have been one hell of a leader.

“I could be a better one!” he shouts, the chains of his harness rattling at his booming voice. “But the Milodan tribesmen and women are all too busy fawning and reminiscing and crying about ‘what could have been’ if Edrei hadn’t been injured.” He calms down and hangs his head, his hands clenching into fists over and over. “Sometimes, [pc.name] Steele,” he mutters, “it feels like I’m not the Alpha of the tribe, and I’m just a sit-in for my mother.”
Spoiler alert, but I ran the idea of Eitan's mom past some people in writer's chat in the Discord, and now people want me to write a Milodan Amazonian MILF
and if I get around to her, she'll probably be futa.

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I was wanting just to talk to her about Eitan, but I like your idea better. Perhaps she's Saint Dick from the milodan chrismas event.
 

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Sorry for the tardiness, but I've updated Eitan with 1,800 words! This completes his final talking scene, where, instead of you asking him any questions, he asks for more information about yourself.
Your journey to inherit your father’s legacy has taken you all over the universe, and you still have so much more to see and more planets to visit. You’ve accomplished more than you could have dreamed was possible before you visited so many different cultures and locations. Mediating the conflict between the Milodan and the Korgonne, and doing what you can to rehabilitate Eitan, is just another step on your adventure.

Eitan sighs as you end your story, his chin resting in his hand. “‘Rehabilitate,’ huh?” he says above a low, throaty growl. “On the one hand, [pc.name] Steele, I don’t like the idea of you trying to manipulate my way of thinking. I am the alpha of the Milodan, and in the end, it’s up to me to decide what that means.” He hums to himself again. “But on the other… like I said, I’ve been thinking about our talks and your way of thinking. Maybe ‘rehabilitate’ isn’t too far off the mark.”
The next thing to write are some demands for what he wants from you, and then after that, either him moving to negotiate with Ula, or a sex scene (he's pretty starved for those). If those sound like a gnarly (in a good way) time to you, hit up my Patreon!
 
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Updated Eitan with 3,000 words! This is mostly just clean-up: him making demands from you in exchange for more talking topics, as well as you completing those tasks and returning to him. None of it is particularly exciting, unfortunately, but it's necessary work to bring us closer to the content that is very exciting.
“[pc.name] Steele,” he begins, his voice low and gravelly. “Tell me. Can you name an enemy that can’t be seen; that no armor can protect you from; that no weapon can defeat; and can conquer someone as strong as myself?”

{Intelligence < 29: You admit that you aren’t certain. You were lost as soon as he asked you to name an invisible opponent.

“Disease,” he answers simply. He frowns and keeps his eye on the Milodan chain-gang as he says the word. “No matter how strong I get, disease can find a way to bring me down.”

{else:“Disease,” you answer. It wasn’t a particularly subtle riddle, if indeed it was one.

Eitan’s eyes turn to yours, and he smiles. “I had expected nothing less from you, [pc.name] Steele.” His eyes go from your own, to your [pc.feet], then back up. “You would have made a fine alpha yourself, you know. In some other tribe.”}
You lift your arms and spin on the spot, showing off your outfit to Eitan. This is exactly what he asked for: for you to wear something sexy so he can think about it when he’s alone at night. You feel you’re on a store shelf, spinning around and showing off to any would-be customer what they can get for the right price – all you need is a price tag to put the cherry on top. You’re supposed to be the one in charge of the conversations, here, and flaunting the goods is a good way to demean that{PC is bimbo and/or has high Libido, and is NOT Hard:. But – on the other hand, showing yourself off like this feels undeniably <i>sexy.</i> It’s <i>you</i> he wanted to show off, and it’s <i>you</i> he’ll be thinking about later. Maybe that can be a strength of yours – maybe you’re more in control of the conversation than you thought}.

Eitan leans back and grins as you move and display your body underneath the sexy clothing. He rubs at his chin with his right palm and he shifts from one leg to the other. The pants he was given by the Korgonne are slipshod and hang off his body loosely, and they, and he, do <i>nothing</i> to mask the budding erection your movements are giving him.
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Updated Eitan with 3,000 words! This is mostly just clean-up: him making demands from you in exchange for more talking topics, as well as you completing those tasks and returning to him. None of it is particularly exciting, unfortunately, but it's necessary work to bring us closer to the content that is very exciting.


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Honestly besides Embry and Dr. Badger. This is one of the characters im actually exited to read the non-lewd parts. Nice
 

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I am very sleepy, so you'll forgive if this post doesn't have the same fanfare as all the others, but I've updated Eitan with 3,000 words!
“You and I have history, chieftain,” Eitan finally starts, rolling his shoulders and leaning forward. “Let’s not make this any more awkward than it needs to be and get right to it. I’d imagine [pc.name] has told you why I asked for an audience with you.”

“{Lessing of us past-talking is better}{The less we talk about our past, the better},” she says venomously. Ula’s nose crinkles at the sound of his voice and her eyes instinctually narrow, but she just as quickly, she relaxes herself. She’s still new to her position as chieftain of the Korgonne, and she’s doing everything she can to remain diplomatic, as much as she’d probably rather run her claws through his stomach.

“{[pc.name] mention talky-talk of peacing between Korgs and Milos,}{[pc.HeShe] told me you wanted to talk peace between the Korgonne and the Milodan,}” she recaps, straightening her back to try and maintain a sense of authority over him. “{Not-belief Ula had of first. Milo and Korg peacing before big Milo attack no-reasoning for.}{I could hardly believe it at first. The Milodan and the Korgonne</i> had <i>peace before you attacked unprovoked.}”

“[pc.name] had given me a lot to think about during [pc.hisHer] visits and our discussions. And, with all the labor you had me doing, I’ve had nothing better to do but reflect.”

Ula snorts at him derisively. “{Unsure if big Milo peace-wanting only because Milos lost. Milos not peace-giving to Korgonne if winning}{I’m sure you’re only after peace now that you lost. I doubt you’d give us the same peace if you won.}”

“Probably not,” he admits. “If I never lost the one fight that mattered most, I wouldn’t have learned the humility I know now.” Despite Ula’s naked aggression towards him, he sits still, totally unfazed by her. “Chieftain, I grew up believing that the Korgonne were my sworn enemies, and it’s taken a lot of time and thinking for me to swallow my pride and admit to my enemy that I was in the wrong. If you don’t think I’m being honest when I say we can make peace, then send me back down. I’ve accepted that I might never leave.”
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Gonna be taking a short break on writing Eitan. Should be back to it next week!
 

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Much longer than a week later, and I'm updated Eitan with 2,500 words! This completes his peace negotiations with Ula and it finally gives peace to him and the Milodan! With this update, they've been released and sent home. The next content is to write a short blurb about meeting him in his tribe, followed by sex scenes and an invite to make him a crewmate. Writing the tribe is a bit of fluff, but it's necessary if I want to write his mom and sister later, as this will establish a setting for them to reside in. It's called "future proofing"!
“[pc.name] Steele,” he begins. You can see something in his eyes that you never saw before – a type of sincere, earnest clarity that was clouded by the attitudes and aggressions that you had talked him out of. It was as if he had cataracts that blinded him from seeing the Korgonne as anything other than an opposing peoples to be subdued and eradicated, and while you doubt he’d ever call them ‘friends,’ you can at least tell that he’s swallowed all that fury, and now, all he wants is to go home.

He, however, doesn’t phrase it as such. In fact, he doesn’t say much of anything at first, at a loss for the words you’d just decided for him to yourself. A moment ticks by awkwardly between you two as he struggles with his next sentence.

“The direction… of not just my life,” he stutters, making it up as he goes, “but of all the Milodan… would have been… uncertain, if it weren’t for you. In the past, I would have preferred that I were victorious over the Korgonne. Failing my attack led to one embarrassment after another, as the alpha of the Milodan, but… knowing how it ends, and that no Milodan alpha after me will suffer the same embarrassments, I’m not sure I would prefer it any other way. There is more to life than fighting and war, and it’s my own fault for having seen it that way in the first place.”

That’s… wow. That’s a touching, sensitive thing to say, especially for a guy like him.
It's been over 20,000 words, but we're very nearly at the sex scenes! If you want to read them long before they're in game, be sure to be my Patreon's little sub!
 

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Eitan would be the second male crew to actually be written, 3rd if Dane gets added first or if thats even still a thing. I thought he would just be what Ciaran, or Chaurmine are currently. This is definitely better! Keep up the good work!
 
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I'm guessing there's no chance for a Hard high-Strength Steele to grab this bitch around the neck and lay into him with a fist a few times for showing attitude when he tries to spook you? Punk Milodan needs to be brought down a peg real personal-like, and the Korgonne just aren't big enough to do so. I mean hey, if you can kill Queen Taivra for doing essentially the same things, a few knuckles should be fine, right? You know, fuck him in the ass, break his back, make him humble.
 
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If we get to meet the tribe, would there be a chance that we can access some of the sex scenes from the siege event later? I absolutely loved the infiltrator's sex scenes and the facesitting scenes. I'm sure he'll be happy to see us since we're the only ones who've ever claimed him that hard. :allears:
 
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If we get to meet the tribe, would there be a chance that we can access some of the sex scenes from the siege event later?
I believe Fen implied that would sort of be the case but it was a while ago so I could definitely be wrong.

I'm guessing there's no chance for a Hard high-Strength Steele to grab this bitch around the neck and lay into him with a fist a few times for showing attitude when he tries to spook you?
Have you considered not being this violently angry in a porn game
 

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Have you considered not being this violently angry in a porn game
Hey, if a warlord tries to enslave you and a whole tribe, then stays all up in your face after he's already been beaten (often violently already, or did you forget the combat portion of this game?), giving him a smack or four isn't exactly a massive escalation. Compared to quite a lot of the content in this game, it's not even worth mentioning, considering that you can own slaves, execute someone, get a whole planet nuked, sucker-punch Dale, violently invade people's territory, rape people, etc. etc..
 

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Hey, if a warlord tries to enslave you and a whole tribe, then stays all up in your face after he's already been beaten (often violently already, or did you forget the combat portion of this game?), giving him a smack or four isn't exactly a massive escalation. Compared to quite a lot of the content in this game, it's not even worth mentioning, considering that you can own slaves, execute someone, get a whole planet nuked, sucker-punch Dale, violently invade people's territory, rape people, etc. etc..
I can't speak for B but the entire point of the project is to show him that the horrible things he attempted to do were wrong, so whether or not you can personally justify the violence, it doesn't really fit the bill.
 
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I'm guessing there's no chance for a Hard high-Strength Steele to grab this bitch around the neck and lay into him with a fist a few times for showing attitude when he tries to spook you? Punk Milodan needs to be brought down a peg real personal-like, and the Korgonne just aren't big enough to do so. I mean hey, if you can kill Queen Taivra for doing essentially the same things, a few knuckles should be fine, right? You know, fuck him in the ass, break his back, make him humble.
The whole point of the content is to try and convince him that violence is wrong. Assaulting a prisoner of war seems very counter-productive.
 

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The whole point of the content is to try and convince him that violence is wrong. Assaulting a prisoner of war seems very counter-productive.
Sometimes people get a bit to agro for there own good, they'll calm down...hopefully.
 

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The whole point of the content is to try and convince him that violence is wrong. Assaulting a prisoner of war seems very counter-productive.
I thought it was that "might is right" is wrong? Just "violence" is a whole other can of worms. Couldn't a little bit of showing off, maybe in a duel or something, help make him respect you (as long as he believes "might is right") and make him more open to other ideas? You know, in a "if this person is this strong, yet telling me these weird things, maybe they're worth listening to" sort of way.
Sometimes people get a bit to agro for there own good, they'll calm down...hopefully.
Christ, you sure take this seriously. Ain't nobody here angry at anything.
 
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I'm guessing there's no chance for a Hard high-Strength Steele to grab this bitch around the neck and lay into him with a fist a few times for showing attitude when he tries to spook you? Punk Milodan needs to be brought down a peg real personal-like, and the Korgonne just aren't big enough to do so. I mean hey, if you can kill Queen Taivra for doing essentially the same things, a few knuckles should be fine, right? You know, fuck him in the ass, break his back, make him humble.
If you dont like the guy, leave him alone. Get your injuryboner out of here.
 

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I thought it was that "might is right" is wrong? Just "violence" is a whole other can of worms. Couldn't a little bit of showing off, maybe in a duel or something, help make him respect you (as long as he believes "might is right") and make him more open to other ideas? You know, in a "if this person is this strong, yet telling me these weird things, maybe they're worth listening to" sort of way.
You beat him in a duel during the Wargii event.
 
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You beat him in a duel during the Wargii event.
How come he doesn't afford Steele any respect after that, though? Is he trying to regain his standing among the prisoners (who obviously know their chief lost) by acting like Steele is just a punk who got lucky or something? "Look, they're not so tough after all," sort of? Or is he just trying to repair some of that wounded pride by acting tougher than he is?
 

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How come he doesn't afford Steele any respect after that, though? Is he trying to regain his standing among the prisoners (who obviously know their chief lost) by acting like Steele is just a punk who got lucky or something? "Look, they're not so tough after all," sort of? Or is he just trying to repair some of that wounded pride by acting tougher than he is?
The fact that you beat him in a fight - an unfair fight, it was 2 vs 1 in Eitan's favour - is brought up and used multiple times in the content against him whenever he suggests that he deserves special treatment just because he's stronger. For example, the title of "alpha" is inherited through combat, and since you won against him, that should technically mean that you're now the alpha yourself. Although it'd be in your right according to his traditions, you don't take the title from him because his identity as the strongest Milodan is very important to him.

The content is extremely aware that you've beaten him in a fight already and uses it several times as an example of how a person can use their strength/status for the betterment of everyone, not just themselves. You'd know that this is the case, and you'd know the answers to your questions, if you would sub to my Patreon and read the whole document, not just the preview and teaser texts.

That he doesn't respect not just you, but anyone, after being defeated and jailed, is the problem the content is trying to fix.
 

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You'd know that this is the case, and you'd know the answers to your questions, if you would sub to my Patreon
I would, but sadly I can't afford to help all the writers I'd like, not with the state my personal economy is in. I'll have to look forward to reading it all in-game in the future, instead, unless my situation improves before then.
 

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Updated with 1,700 words! All of this is just logistical busywork to cover for things like entering the tribe; entering the alpha's tent; and speaking with Eitan. It's all pretty mindless white noise, but it's all necessary to bridge meeting Eitan, and it futureproofs the possibility of meeting other Milodan in the tribe as well - for example, with all this busywork, it lays the groundwork for the possibility of replaying some sex scenes with the Milodan in the Wargii event, and it lays the groundwork for meeting Eitan's family, such as his mother, for later.
His eyes go to the Milodan warrior you’re with. “Leave us be,” Eitan tells the warrior, “and let the tribe know that this one is welcome.”

At that, your escort leaves without another word to spread the news.

“Like I told you, [pc.name] Steele, my people aren’t the most approachable towards strangers,” he laughs. {Femininity >= 61:He extends his hand for you to take, which you do – his grip is gentle and his hand is soft, probably from all that time swinging big, heavy pickaxes around. He only holds it long enough to lead you to the spot beside where he was sitting, but it’s a gentlemanly gesture all the same.}{else:He places one hand on your shoulder, guiding you in from the cold of the exposed tribe, and motions you to the seat beside his own, inviting you to sit. If nothing else, he’s already a fairly gracious host.}

“It’s good to see that you’ve found my tribe without issues, [pc.name] Steele,” he says as he lowers himself to his own sitting position. “I was hoping you would come.”

You tell him that it wouldn’t be very polite to turn down an invitation from the alpha himself. And he’s already been rather accommodating, such as whitelisting your name with just a sentence.

He smiles at you. It’s a genuine, charming, lip-curling, teeth-gleaming smile that disarms you. “You’ll find that I have many more</i> obligations <i>to show you, [pc.name] Steele, as my guest. You need only say the word.”

You glance at his body and the way how it strains the undershirt it’s contained in. You have a pretty clear idea on what sort of <i>amenities</i> someone like him is capable of.

You know, if you want.
The next time I update Eitan, I will finally, finally get started on a sex scene! I'm projected to do four or five. He also needs some more talking topics (which I'd normally do first, but I'm 25,000 words in and there hasn't been a drop of sex yet), which include a discussion about recruiting him.

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Now might be a good time to ask: do you have to have sex with him to complete his redemption arc?
 

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>ctrl+F 'preg'
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Updated Eitan with 2,000 words! In this update, you two start fuckin'.
“I know that I’m desirable. I wouldn’t be much of an alpha if I weren’t. My children will be very strong and healthy.” He hooks a thumb into the waistband of his loincloth and gives it a flick, smiling when the motion attracts your eyes to it. “Before my attack on the Korgonne Hold, if anyone gave me a look like that, I would take them. And if I fancied any partner among the Milodan, I would take them. There wouldn’t be words; as alpha, it’s my right to any partner I desire.”

You shift your [pc.hips] to one side. The idea of being <i>taken</i> by someone as studly as him is… it’s a hot idea, now that you’re looking at him.

“But you’ve taught me that I shouldn’t use my status as alpha so selfishly. The wants of my partner meant nothing to me; all they were to me was a warm body, and their satisfaction wasn’t my concern.” He places his hand on his knee, leaning onto it as he speaks to you. “I have to make a lot of changes to my lifestyle if I’m to be a better alpha for my people, and… well, I don’t intend to stop mating,” he laughs, slapping his knee, “but they’re going to have to change with the rest of them. And who better to start with than you?”

You straighten your back in surprise, that he’d proposition you so suddenly like that. He sees your body language and straightens his own, worried that he had done something wrong. “Sorry, let me rephrase,” he says, extending his hand to you. “I think we both know the answer to this question, [pc.name], but… would you like to mate?”

You look his body over again and imagine it. Being underneath him, feeling the <i>weight</i> and the <i>power</i> of all that muscle <i>boring</i> into you. The grip of his hands on your body, <i>squeezing</i> you. Your hands running through his fur, feeling every <i>rippling</i> muscle as he pants in exertion, thrusting himself <i>into</i> you again and <i>again.</i> {has cock:And then you flipping him over and returning the favor: the feel of his own body <i>clenching</i> onto you, taking you into himself. }And doing it all for <i>hours….</i>

It doesn’t take much to convince yourself. {silly:You wouldn’t have clicked the button if you weren’t already sure!}
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