[Implemented!] Ciaran the Treated ausar, AKA "Hellhound"

[Night Trap]

I find TiTS's lack of husbandos...most disturbing.

To remedy this I've created what was supposed to be a simple character for New Texas: Ciaran, the hellhound. He has subsequently festered blossomed into something much bigger than just an ausar male, so now that I've nailed down his concept I figured I'd give him his own thread due to the comparative (eventual) size of the character. This is the first character I've made from the ground up, so I'm sure I've done something or everything wrong.

Ciaran is a game warden on New Texas who gets free drinks at the saloon for dressing like an old west desperado. He's a muscular ausar DILF, and for reasons his favorite activity is talking to women feminine people. Ciaran is tied to another NPC: Ms. Kittie, the local kaithrit madam. Getting him to really open up to the PC will require interacting with Ms. Kittie. Ms. Kittie will be a source of information on Ciaran, but will no longer be required to unlock all of his content.

He will pitch to anybody but he greatly prefers feminine PCs, and in all his current scenes he is the active, pitching partner. Sorry folks, I just couldn't figure out how to write it without just making the character pansexual. Ciaran is now a gynephile. Only PCs with high (around 60+) Femininity will be able to sex him for now, though you do not have to identify as female or have a vagina. Insert feminine penis jokes here.

I will make Ciaran available to masculine PCs in whatever expansion adds his romance content. You'll have the chance to pull a Brokeback Mountain to get into his pants.

I have more planned for the character because I am an idiot with no sense of scope, but that will all come in later expansion packs.

Edit: HUGE thanks to LashCharge for his edits. I had no idea how to do most of those calls; you've been a massive help.

The initial content is finished. After 6 god damn months, it's done. Ciaran's live! Gigantic thanks to UpcastDrake for coding him. He did a great job fixing a lot of my oversights, so you should all thank him for more than just coding!

 

[eveoflife]

Don't see anything douche about him. Looks like it'll be fun to sit on his lap, if a bit sad if the body language and hints are any indication. Looking forward to seeing what comes of him. With hope he doesn't hit my feels to hard...

 

[Night Trap]

Don't see anything douche about him. Looks like it'll be fun to sit on his lap, if a bit sad if the body language and hints are any indication. Looking forward to seeing what comes of him. With hope he doesn't hit my feels to hard...

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I am looking forward to doing the lap fuck scene, so I sure hope you love extensive knotting blurbs, because that's the main focus of that scene.

And he is going to hit your feels really hard later because I have terrible judgement and made a character that is probably too sad for a porn game.
I just like hugging, fugging, and snugging people with problems in the hopes it makes them feel better.

 

[eveoflife]

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I am looking forward to doing the lap fuck scene, so I sure hope you love extensive knotting blurbs, because that's the main focus of that scene.

Fug yush~!

 

[eveoflife]

His ear scratch scene, with the PC is ausar race mention. It makes me want a branching effect where he turns the tables and makes us the good puppy.

 

[Night Trap]

Good news everyone!

I figured it wouldn't be too out of character for manly types to be able to romance Ciaran. While you'll unfortunately be locked out of sexing him in the saloon, you will still be able to befriend him and have the chance to join him on camping trips and hunting expeditions, where you'll have the opportunity to take your relationship with him to the next level. Play your cards right, and you'll have him wishing he could quit you right after you spend a several nights in the wilderness helping him through his deep-seated psychological issues in no time at all!

 

[shadefalcon]

Good news everyone!

I figured it wouldn't be too out of character for manly types to be able to romance Ciaran. While you'll unfortunately be locked out of sexing him in the saloon, you will still be able to befriend him and have the chance to join him on camping trips and hunting expeditions, where you'll have the opportunity to take your relationship with him to the next level. Play your cards right, and you'll have him wishing he could quit you right after you spend a several nights in the wilderness helping him through his deep-seated psychological issues in no time at all!

Brokeback Mhen'ga?

 

[Ormael]

Brokeback Mhen'ga?

More like Brokeback Myrellion Deep Caves

 

[General Drayfox]

Good news everyone!

I figured it wouldn't be too out of character for manly types to be able to romance Ciaran. While you'll unfortunately be locked out of sexing him in the saloon, you will still be able to befriend him and have the chance to join him on camping trips and hunting expeditions, where you'll have the opportunity to take your relationship with him to the next level. Play your cards right, and you'll have him wishing he could quit you right after you spend a several nights in the wilderness helping him through his deep-seated psychological issues in no time at all!

Ooh! Are those hunting and camping trips gonna be accessible to all characters, and will they take part in new Texas? Also your writing is fantastic!

 

[ayla_mao]

Will you be able to fully romance Ciaran while still keeping him dominant?

 

[Night Trap]

Will you be able to fully romance Ciaran while still keeping him dominant?

Yes, you will. Ciaran will still be his dominant self. He has a soft spot for being pegged though; it makes him nostalgic. Stay tuned to find out why!

And thank you so much @General Drayfox ! It means a lot to me to hear that. Yes, everyone will be able to go hunting and camping with Ciaran. They will happen on New Texas as well. I do have plans for if he becomes a follower to be able to take trips on other planets with him though. They'd be hunting/camping/fishing, except Myrellion, which is just him getting grabbed by super-strong ant women and dragged off to get gangbanged.

 

[Night Trap]

Howdy folks, just wanted to pop in to say everything's alive and kicking with Ciaran. I've just been juggling other projects and writer's block. Mostly I've been polishing and tweaking things like his appearance and a few of his lines in existing scenes. In the last 36 hours I vomited forth 5000+ words of what was supposed to be a simple "ride his lap" scene that would work for anal and vaginal.

That ballooned into a 7000+ word (if you include all variables in the word count) monstrosity that, sadly, only supports vagina-havers. Sorry traps and dickgirls. (Futas, you're in the clear.) If you enjoy mutual teasing until both partners lose control, detailed virginity loss blurbs, love bites, rough sex, knotting, cumflation, and very detailed aftercare (including the rare cum de-flation), this is the scene for you.

I'll probably have to go at this scene with a meat cleaver and chop off the juicier bits for later use, but if you're interested in this abomination of a scene, read it now. Before it's too late!!!

In the meantime, let me hear your thoughts on this scene, particularly what you don't like about it or how it could've been done better. Constructive criticism is the most helpful thing I can receive as a writer (other than shekels of course) because it helps me improve.

And in other great news, we should hopefully have art of Ciaran sometime in the next few weeks, courtesy of the incredibly generous and talented @Rorai (with special thanks to @Zevos for swapping places with me in the waiting list!).

 

[shadefalcon]

I've had a round of proofreading the lapfuck scene, very good stuff
I loved the knotting, cumflation and the deflation part
Great work on those!

 

[eveoflife]

I'll probably have to go at this scene with a meat cleaver and chop off the juicier bits for later use, but if you're interested in this abomination of a scene, read it now. Before it's too late!!!@Rorai (with special thanks to @Zevos for swapping places with me in the waiting list!).

Nuuu!!! Its perfection in my eyes... I wouldn't want this scene to ever get reduced!

In the meantime, let me hear your thoughts on this scene, particularly what you don't like about it or how it could've been done better. Constructive criticism is the most helpful thing I can receive as a writer (other than shekels of course) because it helps me improve.@Rorai (with special thanks to @Zevos for swapping places with me in the waiting list!).

As mentioned earlier, perfection! From tender affections to hellhound outbursts. Being swollen with cum and knotted to the length of his resilience. Even with ausar blurbs and post snu snu cuddles for icing on the cake. Its gonna be one of the main favorite visits for me, indefinitely. The scene is more then I could've hoped for... I'll be a sad pup to see it reduced...

 

[ayla_mao]

just remembered who this guy reminds me of

 

[Night Trap]

just remembered who this guy reminds me of

DAMN YOU!!! I was taking a break from writing a scene for Ciaran when I checked this thread. I ended up reading this whole comic because it speaks to my recently acquired DILF on young trap fetish...

But in all seriousness, the resemblance between Ciaran and Rufus is surprising (and completely unintentional). I had never even heard of Powfooo before now, but I'm sure glad to have found him. I will feed on his backlog of big-bootied young traps getting pounded by large older men and use it to fuel my own writing on the subject.

 

[ayla_mao]

oh dude if you havent read it already youre gonna love crossbusted

 

[Captain Kiera]

I agree wholeheartedly with @eveoflife. That Lap Fuck scene was super hot and this project would suffer if you where to cut parts of it.
I'd love to see a Blowjob scene, but Ciaran does say that he gets enough of those. I can still hope.
Can't wait for the next update.

 

[eveoflife]

I agree wholeheartedly with @eveoflife. I'd love to see a Blowjob scene, but Ciaran does say that he gets enough of those. I can still hope.
Can't wait for the next update.

You and me both, my oral fetish is why I've a 4ft tongue. To please any and all lovers~! I'd love the chance to test his limits with it despite knowing his endurance. See how he handles a modded mouth like mine, and if I can't make him squirm in pleasure...!

 

[Night Trap]

You and me both, my oral fetish is why I've a 4ft tongue. To please any and all lovers~! I'd love the chance to test his limits with it despite knowing his endurance. See how he handles a modded mouth like mine, and if I can't make him squirm in pleasure...!

No promises here or anything, but... I've been trying to figure out how to incorporate red myr venom into a scene for Ciaran. And I also really love long tongues... so I'll see if I can come up with a blowjob scene that involves both. I may just gate blowing Ciaran behind having something special about your mouth like venom or a long tongue. As he says, he gets plenty of fellatio already, but a little something extraordinary would make a good change of pace. Plus I just didn't want to write a normal blowjob scene but long tongue fellatio is pretty hot and I didn't really think about it being an option.

So I'll try to write something like this, but I can't promise I'll succeed.

 

[eveoflife]

No promises here or anything, but... I've been trying to figure out how to incorporate red myr venom into a scene for Ciaran. And I also really love long tongues... so I'll see if I can come up with a blowjob scene that involves both. I may just gate blowing Ciaran behind having something special about your mouth like venom or a long tongue. As he says, he gets plenty of fellatio already, but a little something extraordinary would make a good change of pace. Plus I just didn't want to write a normal blowjob scene but long tongue fellatio is pretty hot and I didn't really think about it being an option.

So I'll try to write something like this, but I can't promise I'll succeed.

I'd assume its just another check like with long tongues, only for the venom. Its got a scene with Sylvie, the moosetaur. Though I'm not 100% sure of the coding details. Easy enough to start though, as we could trail venom soaked kisses from his collarbone down to his now drugged knotty member. I doubt he'll be gentle though.

 

[Draconoid]

red myr venom

edging intensifies

 

[Night Trap]

edging intensifies

WARNING: DO NOT EDGE DAD DOG!

See: Lap Fuck. Though if you really like aftercare then yeah, go ahead and edge him.

Edging Dad Dog is not recommended for women who are pregnant or who may become pregnant. Edging Dad Dog is not for anyone under the age of 18. Ask your doctor if edging Dad Dog is right for you.

 

[Captain Kiera]

WARNING: DO NOT EDGE DAD DOG!

B...but I want to edge dad dog. It could go like this:
Steele invites Ciaran to a private room in the Cathouse and starts some sensual forplay on the bed. Then, while dog dad's distracted, Steele uses the Grav-Cuffs she happens so have to chain him to the bed,in a comfortable enough position of couse. Of course the beds in the Cathouse are quite sturdy, to be able to handle the roughest of bullrides, so Ciaran can't just force his way out. Then the Pc proceeds to lovingly tease and edge the big strong puppy, they may even masturbate infront of him. After some time, Ciaran get lose(either Steele releases the Grav-Cuffs or he Ciaran breaks lose) and jumps Steele. And then we get a scene similar to Kiro's Rough Fuck scene, of course changed to fit Ciaran and Night Trap's writing style. Just an idea

 

[Night Trap]

B...but I want to edge dad dog. It could go like this:
Then the Pc proceeds to lovingly tease and edge the big strong puppy, they may even masturbate infront of him. After some time, Ciaran get lose(either Steele releases the Grav-Cuffs or he Ciaran breaks lose) and jumps Steele.

God damn you people for all this. I thought I was close to being finished with Ciaran and you keep giving me things I want to write. This is actually very close to a scene idea I had earlier but discarded, and I also have been trying to think of how to involve grav-cuffs with Ciaran. I gotta think long and hard about this.

 

[Captain Kiera]

 

[ayla_mao]

God damn you people for all this. I thought I was close to being finished with Ciaran and you keep giving me things I want to write. This is actually very close to a scene idea I had earlier but discarded, and I also have been trying to think of how to involve grav-cuffs with Ciaran. I gotta think long and hard about this.

tbh i just want to see what happens when the daddo gets very angry with the trappo

 

[Draconoid]

God damn you people for all this. I thought I was close to being finished with Ciaran and you keep giving me things I want to write.

We do it because we love you and want the best from you :3
Mebbe combine gravcuffs and venom?

 

[Captain Kiera]

We do it because we love you and want the best from you :3
Mebbe combine gravcuffs and venom?

I agree with the first point, but on the gravcuffs and venom idea, I would like it not to lock the scene to being only available if you have both. If @Night Trap makes myr venom content i'd like it to be an added variation. Of course it's all up to Night Trap in the end.

 

[Emerald]

Guys don't make Night do a content bloat on his submission. :U
As fun as these ideas are, I'm just waiting for Treated Hellhound Doggo DILF to be finished and ready for submission.