Eveno Moar typos/etc

[XBoxMaster131]

this tooltip is pretty out of date, considering bimbo kiro does make milk

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[lowercase_donkey]

missing space

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Beauty herself has turned her face towards you, entreated you. Charmed by the bunny-girl’s directness, you give back a nod and follow the provocative sway of her heavy ass until you’ve rendezvoused in a private booth, surrounded by a thick bass thrum of noise.

“Hey...”she murmurs, drifting close.

actually now that i look at it again, this entire scene as well as the others linked directly to it are missing the spaces that are meant to be before and after quotation marks. like, across the board. sorry if that wasnt explained properly. if you hit this encounter up in game and look for yourself youll see what i mean.

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jesus, there was a lot of these.

 

[lowercase_donkey]

similar situation in this scene...

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Might want to give all the wander scenes a once over just to be thorough.

I don't see the issue in this shot, but also just finished my own review of brothel and may have caught any issue.

 

[lowercase_donkey]

perhaps change the "your arms" bit descriping the frostwrrym wings to something else in order to prevent confusion

and aslo, and im really surry if this is dickish of me to suggest, maybe add a parser so the description of the wing scales matches the character scale color, cuz as of now its always silver

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descriping -> describing
aslo -> also
im -> I'm
surry -> sorry