You need to go back and change the whole basis of the story your trying to tell, give it a few weeks or months, build up your lore, history and race, it feels more like an abusive voyeurism experience rather than horror, there's no story, no background, and your character has nothing interesting going on besides the fact that she has decent tentacle bondage sex
psionics doesn't explain tentacle growth, your alien feels more Eldritch, and straight up looks down on people who have bodies, making it very much a god like being
There's no "happy" ending here, it makes steel seem weak minded, willed, and nothing more than a pawn, which should be given to a submissive role, not a master like you're trying to write, the fact the necklace goes to 100 and you're then stuck is shitty design, that means if I'm not careful and I save at 100 there's no way to revert it so I'm stuck on planet unless I save edit, ruining a save file
There's no way to choose to turn the tables or accept the power ala COC demon corruption and making the servant truly yours
Your Nice, Naughty, and Hard personalities write more like extremes, nice is a virgin, hard is a cuc and naughty is so try hard it's a wonder how they even get a date
Miranda feels like a blank slate goth, her sex scenes play out like a person who thinks they've seen a master and servant relationship rather than an actual one, and all the head jerking felt really unnatural and abusive, her talk scenes are boring, there's no character, someone doesn't need to talk much to convey emotion or interesting dialogue, look at Brandy for an example, and the sex besides the necklace one is vanilla and boring
And lastly, the dreams are boring, weird and just a bad taste and feel skippable, they don't do anything and don't give steel really any incentive of power, sex, or accomplishments as incentives to continue wearing the necklace or a give and take system as higher madness gives more unique lust or psionic skills and buffs but lower intelegence
It's an idea, and I want it to succeed, we need more tentacle scenes in the game and I'm down for 7-10 tentadicks being shoved into someone, but either pass it on or go back and redo everything