[Editors wanted] A Christmas event with PC domming and self-fucking

[Touchandgo]

Ho ho guys and gals, this is my attempt at the Christmas competition. I'm still very green around the gills with parser use, so if I've made any mistakes there please let me know! And, you know, the general writing side of things. I've never written/shared smut before, so this is a whole new experience for me.

It's got some Christmas stuff throughout, but it isn't heavily Christmas-ified so I hope that's okay??

Anywho, here's the link. Don't be a stranger and tell me what you think!

Edit: Finished applying the feedback Soandso and Bio gave me, so it's up for feedback again!

 

[Crablord]

what do you mean by self fucking

 

[Touchandgo]

what do you mean by self fucking

It's like fucking your pussy with your own dick. Apparently, some dudes can do it anally in real life, but in this scenario it's a tentacle dick into a vag because the individual is very desperate. Doc is back up if I'm not being clear enough!

 

[Crablord]

some dudes can do it anally in real life,

sounds scary

i look forward to it. hope its not exclusive to tentacles. good luck

 

[Touchandgo]

sounds scary

i look forward to it. hope its not exclusive to tentacles. good luck

It's for any PC with genitals, it's another character your PC is making desperate enough to screw themselves. (It's even taur friendly!)

 

[Crablord]

(It's even taur friendly!)

woah! :O

 

[Thebiologist]

Edit: Finished applying the feedback Soandso and Bio gave me, so it's up for feedback again!

I barely said anything XD So did all the work.

Also, love the idea of self fucking, we don't have enough of that in-game.

 

[Touchandgo]

I barely said anything XD So did all the work.

Also, love the idea of self fucking, we don't have enough of that in-game.

You definitely helped with bits and pieces of editing and I'm honestly super grateful that y'all even read it.

But yes, the game has tentacle so it's even better. More self fucking! (Maybe it could be a masturbation option??)

Edit: I literally just checked and saw that you were writing the exact thing I suggested. Stupid Timelord stealing my ideas.

 

[Thebiologist]

More self fucking! (Maybe it could be a masturbation option??)

Already beat you to it I posted the doc a few days ago.

Edit: Ah, you've found out.