Just from a first look I can tell you need variations in the scene based on cock size and cum amount. Also not all PCs with cocks have balls so that's going to need to be in a pharser.
[editors needed] Nilleps' shop
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Just from a first look I can tell you need variations in the scene based on cock size and cum amount. Also not all PCs with cocks have balls so that's going to need to be in a pharser.
I've made few comments in the doc. Not all of them are necessary (size and volume discrepancy are often ignored), but mentioning things you are directly lacking (or having in a different form) is quite a major problem.
I'm working through the issue that you and other people have pointed out. I wanted to give you extra thanks though for pointing out where parsers go and which to use
Gives you that warm fuzzy feeling inside you when you have the writer community here helping you with your project doesn't it? 
Gave it a read-over and might do some proofreading later. But I was going to comment that if you don't want to stack your scenes to fit everyone then you can most certainly not do so. You could make a scene specifically for just A and no other letter in the alphabet, so to speak. As someone who's taking my first crack at an encounter, it's something to remember that you can always add onto it later to fit those scenes and types of characters into the smut.
Gives you that warm fuzzy feeling inside you when you have the writer community here helping you with your project doesn't it?
It really does
At present I'm kind of going for my own thing. But I'm definitely gonna make stuff that I hope others will like as well.
Go back several hundred years and that's what you get with Aristocracy and Monarchy.
I was bored so I wrote something for you.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/168p8i5pQapYvC9L7JFUX3KAus2qJiVl5-krllAU2acI/edit?usp=sharing
Tell me if you can use these. If yes, I'll probably write some more.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/168p8i5pQapYvC9L7JFUX3KAus2qJiVl5-krllAU2acI/edit?usp=sharing
Tell me if you can use these. If yes, I'll probably write some more.
I'd like the shop to be set up on Tarkus. Crime does not seem to be that much of an issue, there is no law enforcement in the city of novahome and the locals have no problem with run-away off-worlders.
I'm really liking these hats
If you don't mind I'll include them on my product listIt'd be nice but I hate to think the work it would to program a new item slot like that
Right now the two top candidates for where she would be set up would probably be between Tarkus for the reasons you listed. And Tavros since it's a hub and easy for her to get to and to smuggle stuff in
I'm really liking these hats
I've got no mind at all, but thank you
I'd be delighted.
Maybe put the hats in another tab (I mean an extra button next to talk and shop, or divide the shop in different categories like it is done with Aliss on Tavros), so that if you add other equippable items and transformatives the shop is not getting so crowded. Maybe you could write a short intro for the "hats-menu", where Nillep clears her counter-box and opens it to show you her collection of hats inside. Afterwards there could be another talk scene about why she likes hats so much. As always just ideas. Please ignore at will.
That actually sounds like a great idea and I love an excuse for Nillep to talk about her past some more... also I like talking about hats.
The issue I imagine would be that so many items that would take the slot have already been written or programmed to fit the accessory slot. Then again this could also be a super easy change. I have no idea since I know nothing of programing
I don't think there are THAT many items to rewrite. I'd guess it could be done, but on the other hand I think the accessory slot is fine and sufficient.
It makes sense that she'd join the captain's crew, since she does not seem to be really attached to the planet she is on. Yammi could make some tempting food and shelter on a starship might not be the worst. Only thing I don't see is a serious relationship opening between the captain and Nillep, so that would (for my taste) have to be expanded before thinking about recruitment. But since I like her, sure go ahead and add her to the crew.
EDIT: Should I write some more hats or do you think six is sufficient?
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If I do expand her to the crew I would definitely add more so that there's more connection to her and Steele
I would like to take this moment to say just how much I respect the primary writers of this game. In the amount of time I've spent trying to write this one character that isn't all that complicated, these guys will pump out entire planets and people to occupy them with damn near zero parsers missed. Meanwhile I'm still trying to figure out what the fuck parsers are and to get one sex scene done right.
So honors to all the main fen.co writers and anyone else that has written for trials or coc. You gentlemen and gentleladies are saints. Sex depraved saints.
So honors to all the main fen.co writers and anyone else that has written for trials or coc. You gentlemen and gentleladies are saints. Sex depraved saints.
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Added a variant of the sex scene for females.
Probably gonna modify the penis version
I'll leave this up to you. If you feel more are needed then go ahead and add them. If not, that's also okay
Probably gonna modify the penis version
I'll leave this up to you. If you feel more are needed then go ahead and add them. If not, that's also okay
Yeah, they do a planet a week so you're slackin'. /s
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Made two new hats today. A flat hat and a tricorn. Not really pleased with the flat hat descrption and tool tip, but I could not think of a better way to describe it, while keeping it general and open to imagination at the same time.
I will probably put up my own thread for the doc in the ideas section, so that this can be about the shop and nillep and not so much about her hats and hat mechanics. I'll post the link here when I am done with that.
EDIT: https://fenoxo.com/forum/index.php?/topic/4193-simple-hats/
I will probably put up my own thread for the doc in the ideas section, so that this can be about the shop and nillep and not so much about her hats and hat mechanics. I'll post the link here when I am done with that.
EDIT: https://fenoxo.com/forum/index.php?/topic/4193-simple-hats/
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