Finished reading through the Azyrran scene. Left most of the notes in the Doc. Just going to make some broad observations.
1. Like you noted, it did seem to take a while for Azzy to get involved. You did address it and it wasn't too bad. I didn't make this suggestion in the Doc because it would take a lot of writing, but you could consider having Azzy be there in the scene from the beginning, but watching from the shadows and not directly acting until the time. That would give the scene a different perspective. She'd be there, she'd be part of the scene, even as a voyeuristic or passive participant, but she'd be there and it would feel to the reader, that Azzy would be aware and (hopefully aroused) by the dream, rather than implying she might not even be aware of the activity until she arrives as written.
For instance, you describe a throne against one wall (possibly behind Kas so she can't even view Azzy on it) with a familiar feminine figure resting upon it. She's cloaked in shadows except for maybe a pair of crossed chitin-clad legs just visible in the flickering light of the candles. Then instead of her walking in later with her guard, she finally rises and steps from the shadows with her guard (who was standing near the throne too). If need be, when you ask Kasyrra why Azzy wasn't present (or joining in), just have Kas give her excuse of wanting some one-on-one time and reassure them that Azzy is/was free to interact however she wants... so she must have/be wanting to watch.
2. Do ALT-F and look for 'azzy' and 'kas'. Let that take you to each instance and read the paragraph they're in. If you come to a paragraph that has two (maybe) or three (definitely), then consider changing those to something different. Even 'Azyrran' or 'Kasyrra' will break up the overuse, but beyond that, you've still got 'hornet', 'hornet queen', '(the) Queen', 'caramel cutie' etc, (you can even do a parser to check her outfit and base it on that in a few places (dragoon, dragon hornet, hive queen, cuddlebug, honey maiden, love knight, etc.)
3. Do the same for the words 'cock' and 'tit'. If you see those words show up two or more times in the same paragraph (especially if the word is all alone without an adjective), then use a different word 'shaft, rod, dick, penis, pole, breast, boob, etc. Or at least add an adjective,