I am reposting this since I posted it elsewhere and was found wanting, and it was probably in the wrong thread. Anyway, I've been trying to write good dirty talk for a character I'm trying to make a couple of scenes for, but for the life of me, I can't seem to get it right. She is supposed to be dominant but in a sexy commanding way, but every time I write her, she sounds like a brute. Any recommendations on erotic characters to take inspiration from or books that showcase how to have dominant play in bed without the character coming off as a douchebag?
Edit: Found multiple of what I was looking for but should you, kind stranger, need help or inspiration peep the file below to kick you off.
Edit: Found multiple of what I was looking for but should you, kind stranger, need help or inspiration peep the file below to kick you off.
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