[Accepted] The Mastodon: a Crash Landing Adventure (Version 0.M - Complete)

[Slab Bulkhead]

Hmm...are those cows in the porn someone we (Steele) know?

I thought about that, but nope - I'd have to make it so Steele could say to them "hey, I saw your porn" and I didn't feel like that could really amount to much. But I was watching an art stream for an artist who does great cowgirls last night while working on the room descriptions, and the idea for that porn vid came to me, so I went with it.

As for the robot boss stuff, my goal is to make it something like the space-pirate-in-a-mech boss fight on Tarkus - something you can beat normally, but it's much easier to beat if you use a specific tactic. I'll add clues to the video logs so people can figure it out. (In theory.)

 

[Lone Wolf115]

I thought about that, but nope - I'd have to make it so Steele could say to them "hey, I saw your porn" and I didn't feel like that could really amount to much. But I was watching an art stream for an artist who does great cowgirls last night while working on the room descriptions, and the idea for that porn vid came to me, so I went with it.

As for the robot boss stuff, my goal is to make it something like the space-pirate-in-a-mech boss fight on Tarkus - something you can beat normally, but it's much easier to beat if you use a specific tactic. I'll add clues to the video logs so people can figure it out. (In theory.)

Question: What is your expert opinion on touching cowgirls (how specifically)?
Just a little joke about your profile post "touch the cow do it now". Answer if you want to.

Hmm cool.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

Question: What is your expert opinion on touching cowgirls (how specifically)?
Just a little joke about your profile post "touch the cow do it now". Answer if you want to.

Hmm cool.

https://twitter.com/i/web/status/824856259073499136

 

[mikethor007]

I thought about that, but nope - I'd have to make it so Steele could say to them "hey, I saw your porn" and I didn't feel like that could really amount to much. But I was watching an art stream for an artist who does great cowgirls last night while working on the room descriptions, and the idea for that porn vid came to me, so I went with it.

As for the robot boss stuff, my goal is to make it something like the space-pirate-in-a-mech boss fight on Tarkus - something you can beat normally, but it's much easier to beat if you use a specific tactic. I'll add clues to the video logs so people can figure it out. (In theory.)

Heh, I thought that suddenly the "porn tape" would either have Josie on it, or a couple of cows from New Texas, or perhaps Reaha from when she worked as a hooker.

So, in that robot fight, If i understand correctly, Steele would need to target specific parts, which with TiTS as it is today entails a combat scene with multiple enemies, correct?

https://twitter.com/i/web/status/824856259073499136

Moos are awesome.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

So, in that robot fight, If i understand correctly, Steele would need to target specific parts, which with TiTS as it is today entails a combat scene with multiple enemies, correct?

I haven't figured it all out yet. I've only written enemies once before, and that was years ago in Kimber's first doc. Once I settle on what I want to do, I'll write it up, but it's not what I'm working on next.

(I don't know what part I'll do next)

 

[TheShepard256]

something like the space-pirate-in-a-mech boss fight on Tarkus - something you can beat normally, but it's much easier to beat if you use a specific tactic.

You mean Khorgan? Being a two-parter aside, her fight is pretty straight-forward. You might be thinking of the LG-BT, which gets two attacks per turn unless you've maxed out the pilot's lust (which resets too quickly for me to think doing that strat is worthwhile).

 

[Lone Wolf115]

Well the LG-BT is controlled by a Gab tourist couple, so yeah Khorgan you know the ahem space orcs.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

Updated to version 0.D. This adds pretty all the non-sex scenes with the bar crew, including taking the job and being a horrible person and saying no, along with the triumphant return to Dhaal. It also includes approaching the ship and heading back with the Mastodon.

Not sure what's up next for this, but I'll figure it out soon.

 

[mikethor007]

Updated to version 0.D. This adds pretty all the non-sex scenes with the bar crew, including taking the job and being a horrible person and saying no, along with the triumphant return to Dhaal. It also includes approaching the ship and heading back with the Mastodon.

Not sure what's up next for this, but I'll figure it out soon.

Heh, I just imagined my Captain Steele listening in on Kiki running the numbers on fixing the ship, with quite a couple of BILLIONS trying to burn holes in his pockets. Even just flat out giving them the credits in an anonymous chit would attract attention. Towards them, most probably.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

Heh, I just imagined my Captain Steele listening in on Kiki running the numbers on fixing the ship, with quite a couple of BILLIONS trying to burn holes in his pockets. Even just flat out giving them the credits in an anonymous chit would attract attention. Towards them, most probably.

Heh, yeah. I might have laid it on kind of thick, but I needed to make it clear that this isn't something Steele can solve just throwing a bunch of credits at it. The crew has to keep things as underground and unnoticed as they can. Nobody's gonna think much about yet another ship from some random company getting worked on at the dock, but that company suddenly throwing around a ton of credits would lead to problems.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

The pre-threesome scenes are go. This was basically a lot of back-and-forth as I figured out how things would go if you asked one person first (mostly Josie, since I wrote her stuff first) and then figured out how it'd be slightly different but still end the same if you asked a different person. Lots of weird fiddly shit with editing these scenes, so if anyone spots anything that doesn't work out, please let me know.

I'm not too worried since some of them turned out close enough I could just copy-paste, but still.

Anyway, enjoy the lead-up to sex. Got a few more scenes to do before we get to the actual sex.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

New update is go. This one has some surprises - two things I didn't realize I needed when I first started planning it.

First, there's now a post-ship scene for each of the bar girls, where they talk about how work on the ship is going and all that. There's a pretty big variety of things they've got to say about all of it, and it gave me the chance to really get into their heads and see how they'd feel about all that's happened. It also has Kiki geeking out about a milker for Josie and a VR sex rig for herself.

Second, I did some edits to scenes that are already in the game for after the ship's been brought back, because some stuff the crew said doesn't make sense if they've got a ship of their own and plans to leave. This wasn't as fun as the other stuff, but it bugs me when games don't even bother to acknowledge that you did a quest and everyone's stuck in the past, so I had to do it.

Next up is the robots you'll fight on the Mastodon. I thought this was going to be boring as fuck, but I got DMed some inspiring stuff from Adjatha, and let's just say the designs might be a little different than anyone's expecting.

 

[mikethor007]

New update is go. This one has some surprises - two things I didn't realize I needed when I first started planning it.

First, there's now a post-ship scene for each of the bar girls, where they talk about how work on the ship is going and all that. There's a pretty big variety of things they've got to say about all of it, and it gave me the chance to really get into their heads and see how they'd feel about all that's happened. It also has Kiki geeking out about a milker for Josie and a VR sex rig for herself.

Second, I did some edits to scenes that are already in the game for after the ship's been brought back, because some stuff the crew said doesn't make sense if they've got a ship of their own and plans to leave. This wasn't as fun as the other stuff, but it bugs me when games don't even bother to acknowledge that you did a quest and everyone's stuck in the past, so I had to do it.

Next up is the robots you'll fight on the Mastodon. I thought this was going to be boring as fuck, but I got DMed some inspiring stuff from Adjatha, and let's just say the designs might be a little different than anyone's expecting.

Daaang, I wish this didn't have to wait for something like the JS port to be implemented into the game. Looks like it would be hella fun.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

New update is in, and now, there's nothing left but porn.

No, seriously. I've added the robots you get to fight, all of which were designed by Adjatha - he sent me some sketches based on what was already in the doc, but made them all sexy killing machines, and I thought it was fucking hilarious, so I went with it. You can now look forward to running around the Mastodon and killing curvy combat drones made by Pyrexxx Industreez. (Don't worry. They can kill you right back.)

I also added some items to find, most of which were already listed but didn't have their stats done. Nothing special there, but it had to be done. And now someday you'll be able to get a bra to match the Gabilani Panties from Kimber's first quest.

So now all that's left is the three scenes from Val's porn stash and the oh-fuck-that's-a-high-number of threesome scenes.

 

[mikethor007]

New update is in, and now, there's nothing left but porn.

No, seriously. I've added the robots you get to fight, all of which were designed by Adjatha - he sent me some sketches based on what was already in the doc, but made them all sexy killing machines, and I thought it was fucking hilarious, so I went with it. You can now look forward to running around the Mastodon and killing curvy combat drones made by Pyrexxx Industreez. (Don't worry. They can kill you right back.)

I also added some items to find, most of which were already listed but didn't have their stats done. Nothing special there, but it had to be done. And now someday you'll be able to get a bra to match the Gabilani Panties from Kimber's first quest.

So now all that's left is the three scenes from Val's porn stash and the oh-fuck-that's-a-high-number of threesome scenes.

Awesome!

Though my Captain Steele would be tempted to drag one of the patrol bots back to the ship to try and fix it for sexbot use. Too bad they're utterly broken.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

New update is in, with the three scenes from Val's porn stash. They are:

1. Cowgirl Cowgirl, where one cowgirl rides another cowgirl's dick in the cowgirl position. I know people probably won't believe me, but this wasn't my idea - Sub over on the discord suggested it. But it was a better idea than the one I had, and it's not like I was going to say no to more cowgirl.

2. throbb porn, where two girls make amateur porn and one of them takes Throbb and fucks the other with her new dick. While taking more Throbb to make her dick bigger. And bigger. And bigger. You get the idea. I've had this one in my head for a long time, and it was great to finally write it. It's also seriously fucking long.

3. Ass Transit, where a kaithrit girl with a giant ass gives a public buttjob to a herm woman on a monorail. This one was inspired by this comic by Lewdua, because it's seriously fucking hot. Lewdua's been doing some amazing futa work for a long time, check them out if you haven't.

Only threesomes remain.

 

[mikethor007]

Hardest part will be waiting months for this to get in the game.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

IT BEGINS

I've added the first five threesomes. All three Monika-Kiki threesomes are in, and hoo boy, that's a lot of assfucking. Seriously. I don't think I've ever used "prepare your anus" before but damn, there's a reason I'm using it now. The first one has Steele fucking Monika while she fucks Kiki, all from behind. The second has Kiki riding Steele's dick up her ass while she buttfucks Monika doggystyle. And the last one is, of course, Monika and Kiki double-penetrating Steele.

Seriously. Buttsex everywhere.

There's even more in the other threesomes, as Steele can finally put it up Josie's ass while she rides Monika, or Steele can take Monika up the ass while Josie rides Monika's face then turns around to give Steele oral. Monika does to Josie what George Carlin famously called a "seventy-one".

Anyway! The plan is to do five scenes per week, one every weekday, with editing and posting on Saturdays. Sunday, of course, I will rest. But this means we'll not only have an update every weekend, but all these scenes will be done in another three weeks. It's worked so far, let's see if I can keep it up.

 

[Emily Smith]

I haven't tried yet seeing as I usually play a herm but can Steele use a strap on for the dick scenes?

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

I haven't tried yet seeing as I usually play a herm but can Steele use a strap on for the dick scenes?

I didn't write any strap-on options for the Crash Landing, sorry. It always felt awkward for me writing that when I was doing Kimber's stuff - I never felt like I was really doing it right.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

Last week's threesomes had all the anal, this week's have... most of the oral.

We start with the last Monika-Josie threesome, where Josie goes down on both Steele and Monika, edging them until they cum, then gets thrown on the bed to have her tits sucked and her pussy and ass fingered until she gets off too. It's a good time for everyone, really.

Then we move into all four Josie-Karrah threesomes. First, we have Steele boob-worshiping both girls, because why not, followed by Karrah holding Steele in her arms and fondling Steele's chest while Josie gets Steele off orally. Then we have Karrah bottoming for Steele and Josie, who swap between going down on the thraggen and riding her face. Third, we have a similar one but it's Steele on the bottom, getting rode by Karrah and Josie, who swap whenever they cum. This one ends with a double titfuck from the girls.

Finally, for Steeles with at least two dicks, we've got Karrah and Josie double-riding those dicks, complete with a milk bath that's a shoutout to an old CoC scene.

Fuck me, that's a lot. But with ten scenes complete, the expansion's threesome scenes are now over halfway done. Only nine left. Hope everyone likes them.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

Another five threesomes are in. If you like Kiki, this is your update.

First, we have all three Kiki-Josie scenes. One has Steele sitting on Kiki's dick while getting oral from Josie, another has Kiki and Steele doing the classic "finger cuffs" on Josie with Steele getting oral and Kiki being the kind of person who maintains eye contact while she cums up Josie's ass, and finally, we have Steele fucking Kiki in the ass while Kiki pounds Josie's ass. That last one's my favorite because it's fun to see Kiki get utterly drained.

Second, we have the first two Kiki-Karrah scenes. One has Karrah and Steele both riding Kiki, with Karrah taking that horsecock up the ass while Steele either rides Kiki's face or gets a titfuck, depending on what Steele's packing. The second has Karrah topping the fuck out of Steele and Kiki both while they double-penetrate her.

FOUR THREESOMES REMAIN. After that, just editing this whole monster of a document.

Thanks for reading, as always.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

IT IS DONE

I've added the last four threesomes.

For Kiki and Karrah, the last scene has Steele in the middle, taking it up the ass from Kiki while fucking Karrah with whatever they've got between their legs.

For the three Karrah-Monika scenes, the first has Monika in the middle, with Steele fucking her while she fucks Karrah. The second has Steele in the middle, with Monika fucking them from behind while they go down on Karrah. Last, there's Karrah in the middle, with her on the top of a 69 with Steele and Monika fucking her from behind. Do you want balls on your face? Because that's how you get balls on your face.

Anyway, that's the last of it, and holy shit that's a lot of sex. I am never doing this many sex scenes in one doc ever again. All that's left to do is edit and clean everything up, and hopefully I can get this thing ready for prime time soon.

Also, Adjatha did this:

 

[Emily Smith]

Woo looking forward to this being in the game.. I love these four ladies... so worth the trip to Dhaal.

 

[SeriousBlueJewel]

IT IS DONE

I've added the last four threesomes.

For Kiki and Karrah, the last scene has Steele in the middle, taking it up the ass from Kiki while fucking Karrah with whatever they've got between their legs.

For the three Karrah-Monika scenes, the first has Monika in the middle, with Steele fucking her while she fucks Karrah. The second has Steele in the middle, with Monika fucking them from behind while they go down on Karrah. Last, there's Karrah in the middle, with her on the top of a 69 with Steele and Monika fucking her from behind. Do you want balls on your face? Because that's how you get balls on your face.

Anyway, that's the last of it, and holy shit that's a lot of sex. I am never doing this many sex scenes in one doc ever again. All that's left to do is edit and clean everything up, and hopefully I can get this thing ready for prime time soon.

Also, Adjatha did this:

I feel that Kiki should have been moved a bit to the left so it appears she is brushing Karrah's nipple

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

I feel that Kiki should have been moved a bit to the left so it appears she is brushing Karrah's nipple

It looks like she's got that nipple right in her hand to me, which is where she and Karrah would both want it.

 

[mikethor007]

Noice. And very hot.

Shame it'd likely only be implemented after the JS port, I assume. It's a new quest complete with a dungeon...

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

Noice. And very hot.

Shame it'd likely only be implemented after the JS port, I assume. It's a new quest complete with a dungeon...

I dunno about that. I know some content is still getting added to Dhaal. I'm gonna submit it as per usual when it's done, and we'll see what happens.

 

[mikethor007]

I dunno about that. I know some content is still getting added to Dhaal. I'm gonna submit it as per usual when it's done, and we'll see what happens.

It'd be awesome if it squeaked in and made it into the flash version. I'd fall on it like a ton of bricks.

 

[Slab Bulkhead]

Aaaaaaaaand it's done. Again. I just finished with the editing pass, so it looks like this one is good to go. Thankfully I didn't have to change much - I caught a bunch of repeated word use and a few small errors, but it was mostly good.

I also caught a typo that had Kiki cumming up her own ass, which is something she can probably do, but she was fucking Josie at the time. So yeah, I fixed that.

I gotta say, I don't talk up my own work very much, but I'm really happy with how this turned out. It feels like I gave the crew a good... maybe not an ending, but something to look forward to, and reading the post-ship chats makes it seem like they're going to be all right. And we could all use that kind of thing sometimes.

Anyway, I'm gonna submit this thing as soon as I finish with this post. Adjatha (who's doing the submission review, if you didn't see that blog entry) told me to let him know when I submitted it, so here's hoping this thing gets reviewed and maybe even added sometime soon.

Thanks for reading.