Hirrud > Bimbo Brew > Keep
1. 'bed's' with an apostrophe-s.
Wayfort > Haddi
2. 'Everybody's'
Haddi > Appearance
3. Capitalize 'Khor'minos'.
Haddi > Milk
4. Appearance states R-cups, Milk scenes states D-cups.
Haddi > Cat Apology
5. Capitalize 'Lips'.
6. Not sure if there was meant to be something after 'and' and then a new sentence with 'When Calill ..' or if was intended 'love, and when Calill ...'
1. 'bed's' with an apostrophe-s.
Wayfort > Haddi
2. 'Everybody's'
Haddi > Appearance
3. Capitalize 'Khor'minos'.
Haddi > Milk
4. Appearance states R-cups, Milk scenes states D-cups.
Haddi > Cat Apology
5. Capitalize 'Lips'.
6. Not sure if there was meant to be something after 'and' and then a new sentence with 'When Calill ..' or if was intended 'love, and when Calill ...'