Khor'minos Feast
Barnaphous
1. 'theirs'
Armitia Moongiven > The Tiran Cathedral
2. 'reined', like reining in a horse.
Armitia Moongiven > The Goddess of War
3. 'free rein', like giving a horse its lead. Not reign like a king, though that's understandable.
King Kelsaz > Ask About Calise
4. Almost positive it should be 'writhing' on the ground incoherently. If the demon knight had a spell that made people start writing incoherently on the ground... I guess that's effective too... Just seems like it would be a weird choice of spell for a siege.
Calise
5. 'she'd' instead of 'she's'
Dancing with Princess Varena
6. 'are' instead of 'is', though this might just be the vagaries of a breast parser return.
Dancing the last dance with Calise
7. remove 'the'
Dancing the last dance with Calise > Let Her Lead
8. remove the 's' on the end, just s-apostrophe, not s-apostrophe-s.
Barnaphous
1. 'theirs'
Armitia Moongiven > The Tiran Cathedral
2. 'reined', like reining in a horse.
Armitia Moongiven > The Goddess of War
3. 'free rein', like giving a horse its lead. Not reign like a king, though that's understandable.
King Kelsaz > Ask About Calise
4. Almost positive it should be 'writhing' on the ground incoherently. If the demon knight had a spell that made people start writing incoherently on the ground... I guess that's effective too... Just seems like it would be a weird choice of spell for a siege.
Calise
5. 'she'd' instead of 'she's'
Dancing with Princess Varena
6. 'are' instead of 'is', though this might just be the vagaries of a breast parser return.
Dancing the last dance with Calise
7. remove 'the'
Dancing the last dance with Calise > Let Her Lead
8. remove the 's' on the end, just s-apostrophe, not s-apostrophe-s.