When hunting the large elk with Hana, should be "Hana:"
When flirting with Hana for the first time, should be "supple and:"
When returning to visit Hana for the first time after the first flirt, looks like there's a double parser fire, maybe?:
When entering Hana's tent, the term is "cookware:"
When taking Hana doggystyle, should be "grips:"
When sitting on Hana's lap, missing word after "from:"
Same scene, either a comma after "whispering" or cut the comma after "me:"
Missing period after "gutters:"
Thanks!
When flirting with Hana for the first time, should be "supple and:"
When returning to visit Hana for the first time after the first flirt, looks like there's a double parser fire, maybe?:
When entering Hana's tent, the term is "cookware:"
When taking Hana doggystyle, should be "grips:"
When sitting on Hana's lap, missing word after "from:"
Same scene, either a comma after "whispering" or cut the comma after "me:"
Missing period after "gutters:"
Thanks!
