Meeting Farrah after the Renovations are completed (Coming out of the Ways Between)
1. 'Ways Between' should be capitalized.
![WF01.png WF01.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35308-3d8fe5476eb990b4921c8282a18cd205.jpg)
2. Looks like this an incomplete sentence. Should end it with something about Farrah, like '... you're brought short by a [waiting shadow/lurking figure/sapphire woman/familar blue woman/etc.]
![WF02.png WF02.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35309-dd2abc1651f1befe731323982bd3f262.jpg)
3. Should be 'from' instead of 'form'.
![WF03.png WF03.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35310-625fd325a7b2dac0c4320cdedcd0c112.jpg)
4. Should delete 'between ways'. It doesn't make sense 'you step down from the statue between ways,' Can just be 'statue.' =
![WF04.png WF04.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35311-109bb111e58ceea5227eaf4b17c36db6.jpg)
5. While her lips could be a very, very dark blue, I think they're actually black. Or 'onyx' or 'obsidian'.
![WF05.png WF05.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35312-4b8c683a09dd3a77185be3a8c1c208a1.jpg)
1. 'Ways Between' should be capitalized.
![WF01.png WF01.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35308-3d8fe5476eb990b4921c8282a18cd205.jpg)
2. Looks like this an incomplete sentence. Should end it with something about Farrah, like '... you're brought short by a [waiting shadow/lurking figure/sapphire woman/familar blue woman/etc.]
![WF02.png WF02.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35309-dd2abc1651f1befe731323982bd3f262.jpg)
3. Should be 'from' instead of 'form'.
![WF03.png WF03.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35310-625fd325a7b2dac0c4320cdedcd0c112.jpg)
4. Should delete 'between ways'. It doesn't make sense 'you step down from the statue between ways,' Can just be 'statue.' =
![WF04.png WF04.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35311-109bb111e58ceea5227eaf4b17c36db6.jpg)
5. While her lips could be a very, very dark blue, I think they're actually black. Or 'onyx' or 'obsidian'.
![WF05.png WF05.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35312-4b8c683a09dd3a77185be3a8c1c208a1.jpg)