[0.7.6] Wayfort typos

[Ace Hangman]

Meeting Farrah after the Renovations are completed (Coming out of the Ways Between)

1. 'Ways Between' should be capitalized.


2. Looks like this an incomplete sentence. Should end it with something about Farrah, like '... you're brought short by a [waiting shadow/lurking figure/sapphire woman/familar blue woman/etc.]


3. Should be 'from' instead of 'form'.


4. Should delete 'between ways'. It doesn't make sense 'you step down from the statue between ways,' Can just be 'statue.' =


5. While her lips could be a very, very dark blue, I think they're actually black. Or 'onyx' or 'obsidian'.

 

[Ace Hangman]

Farrah giving a tour of the newly renovated Wayfort

6. While I think most Americans would just call them 'stocks' (I am not getting into pillories or prangers or stocks) and reserve 'stockade' for a wooden wall, either way I think this should be 'any' instead of 'an'.


7. Demeanor' instead of 'demeanour' using American English. Normally I wouldn't worry if it was the only issue, but if you're already working on the page...

 

[zagzig]

Should be sorted, cheers.