About to give birth scene:
meto - > me to

Post-Birth:
he - > her

Missing "it"

"Empower it" follow-up:
This one confused me a little. The amulet is described as "...a strange amulet sitting on the window sill — the bronze medallion, itself, is round with eight, elongated spokes reminiscent of a sun and a topaz set in the center of it. There's symbols in a strange script engraved along the concentric circles around the sun-like design." But then the game proceeds to state that Drifa is "Holding the red egg by its golden cord". I could have missed something, but the aforementioned description doesn't really say the amulet is egg-shaped, or red for that matter.
Also, in the line above the highlighted text, it should say "moons" instead of "mons," and "There’s" in the first description should be "There are."

Very awkward wording

That - > The one

Abrupt paragraph cut.

Depending on the Pc's chest piece, there can be some grammar issues here ( apprentice robes is - > apprentice robes are), and Drifa's name is incorrectly spelt as "Difa"

Doog - > Dog (Possibly intentional?)

meto - > me to

Post-Birth:
he - > her

Missing "it"

"Empower it" follow-up:
This one confused me a little. The amulet is described as "...a strange amulet sitting on the window sill — the bronze medallion, itself, is round with eight, elongated spokes reminiscent of a sun and a topaz set in the center of it. There's symbols in a strange script engraved along the concentric circles around the sun-like design." But then the game proceeds to state that Drifa is "Holding the red egg by its golden cord". I could have missed something, but the aforementioned description doesn't really say the amulet is egg-shaped, or red for that matter.
Also, in the line above the highlighted text, it should say "moons" instead of "mons," and "There’s" in the first description should be "There are."

Very awkward wording

That - > The one

Abrupt paragraph cut.

Depending on the Pc's chest piece, there can be some grammar issues here ( apprentice robes is - > apprentice robes are), and Drifa's name is incorrectly spelt as "Difa"

Doog - > Dog (Possibly intentional?)
