Ask her about being a genie, there's a missing space
C chastepants Active Member Jan 23, 2025 29 2 31 Feb 6, 2025 #1 Ask her about being a genie, there's a missing space
C chastepants Active Member Jan 23, 2025 29 2 31 Feb 6, 2025 #2 And another - post-freeing her, in the family roleplay scene
C chastepants Active Member Jan 23, 2025 29 2 31 Feb 6, 2025 #3 Another in the same scene, I think this sentence should say "her chin" rather than "your chin"
C chastepants Active Member Jan 23, 2025 29 2 31 Feb 6, 2025 #4 And a writing inconsistency - the start implies PC shares a room with their sister, but the end says they have separate rooms
And a writing inconsistency - the start implies PC shares a room with their sister, but the end says they have separate rooms
C chastepants Active Member Jan 23, 2025 29 2 31 Feb 6, 2025 #5 Another writing inconsistency, in the harem scene - are there 7 Omas or 10?
teawolf Well-Known Member Moderator Jan 30, 2024 468 166 38 Today at 8:40 PM #6 Typos fixed for upcoming; rest under writer review. Thank you!