Ask her about being a genie, there's a missing space
C chastepants Member Jan 23, 2025 24 2 31 Today at 5:02 PM #1 Ask her about being a genie, there's a missing space
C chastepants Member Jan 23, 2025 24 2 31 Today at 6:22 PM #2 And another - post-freeing her, in the family roleplay scene
C chastepants Member Jan 23, 2025 24 2 31 Today at 6:40 PM #3 Another in the same scene, I think this sentence should say "her chin" rather than "your chin"
C chastepants Member Jan 23, 2025 24 2 31 Today at 6:47 PM #4 And a writing inconsistency - the start implies PC shares a room with their sister, but the end says they have separate rooms
And a writing inconsistency - the start implies PC shares a room with their sister, but the end says they have separate rooms
C chastepants Member Jan 23, 2025 24 2 31 Today at 7:23 PM #5 Another writing inconsistency, in the harem scene - are there 7 Omas or 10?
