[0.7.2] Tetsuya typos

[ghostwriter207]

[Talk] > [Komari]

Given the lack of quotation marks and that this is Champ talking, I'm not sure this was meant to be italicized. It doesn't feel like this whole sentence should be receiving that much emphasis.

[Intimate Sex]

Possible oversight? In the document in Jstar's submission thread, if Champ has multiple tails, this generates "as your tails wag ever faster and your ears start to instinctively flatten." Evidently there's no support for PC having a single tail, such as if they're catfolk/lupine/vulperine/whatever. This may be intentional, in which case, please ignore.

[Vigorous Sex]

Too many hands.

Redundancy with the phrase "in his eyes."

This isn't really a typo so much as it is a nitpick, but technically this is not grammatically correct - it should be "you and he," not "you and him." The best way to tell is that, if you removed "you and" from the sentence, it would be "he rolls around on the floor," not "him rolls around on the floor."

 

[ghostwriter207]

An update from another user on the Discord: There are certain circumstances in which scenes with Tetsuya refer to the player as having a womb, even if they do not.

Specifically, it occurs at the tail end of Tetsuya's Vigorous Sex scene, which contains the statement "Then, with a sudden jerk, you feel the contents of his testicles unleash, cramming your womb with even more of his [pc.hasFertileCunt|rich, life-giving warmth|hot cum] until he's well and truly empty — the exulting result of it has never made you feel more sated and fulfilled, and your body rewards you for submitting to your instincts with one of the most incredible orgasms you've ever experienced."

This sentence is not gated behind a [pc.hasVagina] parser and will appear even if Champ does not, in fact, have a womb.

 

[zagzig]

There's nothing to indicate the italicised sentence and tails parser aren't intentional, so I left that. And when I tested the vigorous sex scene the parser was working correctly. The rest should be fixed, cheers.

 

[ghostwriter207]

New one found - during the scene that triggers when PC's pregnancy by Tetsuya has hit the 70% mark, and they're in the Kitsune Den. Double punctuation at the end of the sentence.

 

[zagzig]

Should be sorted, cheers.

 

[ghostwriter207]

During the scene giving birth to a child with Tetsuya, there's a missing word - "looking up at the ceiling as you and breathe slowly." This is child number 8. I don't know if this typo occurs during versions where Champ doesn't cum while birthing the kit.

 

[ghostwriter207]

[Talk] > [People] > [Nakano]
There's missing punctuation between "grandmother" and "I" in his first statement, and the second part should be italicized and isn't. The opening quotations are also accidentally attached to the ending of "shrugs," instead of the start of "my."

 

[ghostwriter207]

First time having sex with him via the "Intimate" option if Champ is a virgin. I suspect that's supposed to be "eyelids" feeling heavy. "Eyes" feeling heavy is... a bit weird.