When Kavi asks the champion to find her daughter, missing quotation mark after "dear:"
![1722887334737.png 1722887334737.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36292-4a6584fe4fe4ad08b86723931fb36713.jpg)
When searching for a huntress in the "Help" route, missing "as" before "still" (since it's followed by "as she can manage"):
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 4.27.05 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 4.27.05 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36293-1c36ca7b9330cf6f1577ab8ec0bf399b.jpg)
Same page, not sure if this is a typo or not, but I think this should be "bimboish"?
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.25.40 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.25.40 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36297-23a0ee5dc5b672fadae0134e9ed24e53.jpg)
When watching Tarah and the huntress--for clarity, I'd suggest changing the second "she" to "Tarah," but maybe stylistic:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.29.36 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.29.36 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36298-ee3c22f3d2aafddf9078430c5069ba5e.jpg)
Suggest changing "she dutifully..." to "Tarah dutifully..." for clarity:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.32.43 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.32.43 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36299-c39e0d9437d69ba0ab70514aa7b34d03.jpg)
Since Tarah is the prior referent, I'd suggest changing "she finds" to "the woman" or "the huntress:"
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.34.20 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.34.20 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36300-a5e7ceb97dfa3cfbe6139ed7a9ded3ac.jpg)
Missing period after "commands:"
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.36.46 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.36.46 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36301-9a95749887c05c0c918ffad86cdab22f.jpg)
When returning to Kavi on the "Help" route, "did" should be lowercase:
![1722890802091.png 1722890802091.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36294-78b015387ef9149c6bf630baae99ace8.jpg)
When talking to Tarah about her statuettes, "Keros" should be capitalized:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 6.09.15 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 6.09.15 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36302-9af8df39d54c654bf21d5e26e8d66731.jpg)
If the PC didn't romance Tarah, the end of the statuette discussion still assumes they did with a kiss and hand-holding:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 6.10.43 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 6.10.43 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36303-2f167f811e899ecaea27557409c33b70.jpg)
![1722887334737.png 1722887334737.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36292-4a6584fe4fe4ad08b86723931fb36713.jpg)
When searching for a huntress in the "Help" route, missing "as" before "still" (since it's followed by "as she can manage"):
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 4.27.05 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 4.27.05 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36293-1c36ca7b9330cf6f1577ab8ec0bf399b.jpg)
Same page, not sure if this is a typo or not, but I think this should be "bimboish"?
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.25.40 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.25.40 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36297-23a0ee5dc5b672fadae0134e9ed24e53.jpg)
When watching Tarah and the huntress--for clarity, I'd suggest changing the second "she" to "Tarah," but maybe stylistic:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.29.36 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.29.36 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36298-ee3c22f3d2aafddf9078430c5069ba5e.jpg)
Suggest changing "she dutifully..." to "Tarah dutifully..." for clarity:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.32.43 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.32.43 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36299-c39e0d9437d69ba0ab70514aa7b34d03.jpg)
Since Tarah is the prior referent, I'd suggest changing "she finds" to "the woman" or "the huntress:"
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.34.20 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.34.20 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36300-a5e7ceb97dfa3cfbe6139ed7a9ded3ac.jpg)
Missing period after "commands:"
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.36.46 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 5.36.46 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36301-9a95749887c05c0c918ffad86cdab22f.jpg)
When returning to Kavi on the "Help" route, "did" should be lowercase:
![1722890802091.png 1722890802091.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36294-78b015387ef9149c6bf630baae99ace8.jpg)
When talking to Tarah about her statuettes, "Keros" should be capitalized:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 6.09.15 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 6.09.15 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36302-9af8df39d54c654bf21d5e26e8d66731.jpg)
If the PC didn't romance Tarah, the end of the statuette discussion still assumes they did with a kiss and hand-holding:
![Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 6.10.43 PM.png Screen Shot 2024-08-05 at 6.10.43 PM.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/36/36303-2f167f811e899ecaea27557409c33b70.jpg)