Enter Camp > Followers > Sex > Facesitting (Bad End)
11. Should be 'hand' instead of 'handshake'. 'You shake her hand.' or 'You return her handshake.'
Sex > Oral
12. This scene happens in camp, Champ walks away from camp to call her, so not even in their tent where they might be a camp...
Meridyx > Combat (Victory) > Sex > Full Nelson
1. Looks like 'down' doesn't fit here. Unless it's 'move your hands down to her shoulders'.
2. Looks like 'her' doesn't fit here. Unless this is the start of a parser.
3. Remove an extra 'out'.
Sex > Let Her Lead
4. Extra space here...
Drifa > Give > Kiss > Gentle
1. Should be a space here.
Drifa > Sex > Tummy Fuck
2. Add 'you' in between.
3. Extra period here. Likely a pregnancy parser remnant.
4. Should likely be 'into you' unless its flowing into Champ's penis or body or some other noun.
5. Add space here.
More various typos people send to me:
Marefolk Village > Stylists > Sex > Rail > Aunora > Yes (another round
1. Should be 'cock as hard as the moment you put it in her tail hole.'
Khor'minos > Milking Barn > Livrea Visit
2. Should be 'walk over here' instead of 'walk over her'.
Random...
What if there was a slime or honey or sticky set that if the torso piece is equipped, had a Stance/At will you could select, it lowers the wearer's Initiative or speed when active (cause they stick to the ground and things), but could disarm an opponent if they hit the wearer? Possibly with a...
Your options may open up and expand once you reach the minotaur city of Khor'minos. Nikol the northern minotaur brothel whore can be subby or dom, most minotaur men or soldiers will at least let you pleasure them. And Knife-wielding Crab has a Odoacer the minotaur mining foreman in there...
Drifa (corrupt) > Give > Pet > Face
11. Remove 'through'.
Drifa (pure) > Sex > Titfuck
12. These two paragraphs shouldn't be italicized. Probably from the paragraph above not being closed out.
Drifa (corrupt) > Sex > Doggystyle
13. This all seems to be bolded.
Some of these have been sitting in a folder awhile, so apologies if already addressed.
Drifa > Appearance (Married and Pregnant, if that matters)
1. Extra punctuation or parser remnant.
Drifa (corrupt) > Talk > People > Rumie
2. These two paragraphs are entirely italicized when the...
Some of these might be old or already fixed. Apologies if so.
Send Drifa into Corrupt Pool for chest.
Observe > Submit (or get overpowered)
1. Should be 'vise' (a tool that clamps things) instead of 'vice' (a bad habit), at least in American English. While 'viselike' or 'vise-like' is the...
Seems like it would be simpler to just conquer the Marches with Kasyrra and demonify everyone so they can just take the shape that Champ, their new overlord and master, desires. Even if most of the time it's looking like Demon-Ryn (Queen Alissa had the right idea one time).
Evergreen > Sex > Cock Sleeve
1. 'Its' instead of 'It's'.
2. Extra space after 'your'. (Normally I wouldn't post just for that, but while you're here.)
3. Extra space between 'a' and 'moan'.
4. 'of her member' instead of 'of your member'.
5. 'choke' instead of 'coke'
6. space between...
You look over the charred remains of the shop in Winter City. A passerby tells you that the culprit started the blaze and vanished, shouting,
"I, Raphael, have set fire to this establishment for no particular reason... except I love the smell of roast beef! Mwahahah!" before running to the...
That kind of thinking's all well and good until someone wants to write big, muscly, amazonian, futa-cock, salamander women. Then where will we be, B? Where will we be?!
Tychris, I guess.
Tried to test it.
Champ was 4th level with 6 Presence.
This is just after birthing Kinu and she has four tails.
This is after her second child and five tails. No change.
It was the same at six tails.
This is after drinking Lover's Dry to raise Presence to 14 (at four tails). Definitely much...
Yeah, I think the same way when I see reptiles or egg-layers with big mammaries. I'm like, snakes and spiders don't have titties! But then I think of taking those Moira-drawn things away... and I decide I'm okay with it.
My champ has belt full of lucky rabbit/taeleer feet. So soft.
I think some of it has to do with Viv not being a companion until recently, and I think most scenes predate her being around. But what you say certainly is valid, it adds to atmosphere and lore and a feeling of a living world. Sometimes it just gets neglected depending on the writer (or some...
I don't think it's planned or that anyone has mentioned a plan to write an NPC that does that or add pregnancy to any of the existing siorcanna. That said, there's certainly a fertile ground (pun intended) of viable NPCs in Starhome that could work for such scenes. Someone would just have to be...