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You're entitled to your opinion. I view it differently. I don't think you're viewing it correctly. You're looking at it like a human with a very narrow, self-centered mindset. Where do you think their souls would have gone? To Tira? What do you think they would be doing? They aren't in Limbo...

Purely to test for pronoun parser errors and to test out feminine gear. Can't just have some dude running around in seaweed panties and a Tiran nun's habit. That would be weird.

300 pages! I was thinking of writing a picnic scene for Clementine and it would be like... four! I get that it's both a date and a party... but what, are there choices between seven-course meals and what color and type of carriage to ride in? Do you have a choice between which animals to see and...

The art looks pretty clean. The guy's body hair is good but seeing the goblin's teeth is a bit of a turn-off to me personally. Something about it that triggers my punch-in-the-face response.

I have never had any problem with Lyric (once in a valid tile). My Lyric is a girl, maybe your Lyric needs a vag if a boy. I know my Lyric had an option to grow a girl-penis, maybe yours has a similar one? Even if that's not something you want for them, you could test it out and then Reload to...

My thoughts when I consider that, from an in-world perspective; I am not opposed to the idea, from the point of view of you wanting that Champ to do something that would impact the world potentially, but I don't think it would be in a good way narratively (at this point). Maybe it will come...

Naw, that's the easy way. We know the correct answer is to sneak Azzy into the scene, have her slip her little ovipositor between the cowgirl's cheeks and pump her with some baby hornet eggs. Wait a bit until she starts lactacting honey instead of milk as the pregnancy progresses... and party...

I caught up with my other editing projects and started to take a look at Tykis' Document. I went through the Purifying scenes and just stopped at the Corruption part. I made some notes (just opinions, suggestions, humorous observations). They are just one person's thoughts, others can disagree...

Hmm... One of our companions is sibling to the ruler of a kingdom and must be deposed... There's a witch that sends her daughters out in the world... only to take over their bodies when she gets too old and needs a new one... We descend into the underworld to fight an army of demons being...

Maybe Gwyn in the Frosthound. I know she has a place in the Nursery and should be near the children in the night, but it might be nice once in awhile... or I guess in that location if the Champ chooses Sleep in the Frosthound he goes to her room instead of his own. Drifa as a bedmate in Wayfort...

The Eve of Adam Figleaf. It's an underwear slot magic item that covers your privates for modesty. For every empty or default slot (ie Rusty Dagger) you have, it gives a reasonable Spellpower boost... but a coinciding increase to Cold vulnerability and Presence loss... cause you're otherwise...

If things are working properly, she'll show up during the ambush (It will describe her differently). Presumably you have to sex her at least, to get her to want your cock (I assume you need one). Then she might show up at Frosthound. There's so many things that can happen at the Frosthound that...

Do you mean getting her to visit you in your room at the Frosthound or getting her to arrive at the Wayfort?

It could be a damage dealer in so much as you can use Tease to wreck almost anything that isn't an animal or construct. After that, you will also have a summon spot (Kiyoko, Hopelite, Effigy seed in a pinch) for additional threat or damage.

Venom Withdrawal Status effect You're itching for a fix of the good stuff... Reduces maximum HP by –10. I think the duration is 6 hours. I don't have more details on how the addiction works or progresses just yet. Venom Craving Status effect Your addiction to Azzy's venom is decaying... but...

Take your blank powder regularly.

You're right... this imbalance can't stand. Let's get to work on those jotun and giants.

Pretty sure you can check back on previous editing as the author by clicking the Changes Since button and selecting a version from a previous date, at least to see where they were. Otherwise, I guess the next time I go through I can add a comment like, 'Sigh...maybe a [silly|twunk] here...'

I am not going anywhere near that coffee table until it cools down. Kidding. As an editor, it always amuses me how people like to arrange their adjectives in a sentence... strangely. Amused. Strangely amused.

Simple answer is probably because Ryn is such a wonderfully written and detailed character and with such amazing interactions that readers will always want more because they feel a connection. Equally simple answer is that most readers want to impregnate everything.