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I read through it. Very good grammar. The use of color for the parsers really helped parse them out and differentiate them. I am sure that will be appreciated. Very few typos. I am not an audience for this scene (unless I put myself in Rroljar's position), but it definitely suited his...

Could it be done? Possibly. The issue like you said, a metric fuck-ton and a lot of work. Some artist would have to make the modular images. There'd be human faces, elven faces, cat faces, horsey faces, wolf faces, demonic faces, foxy faces.... then probably human ears, pointy ears, sail-like...

I mostly wanted to start a statue collection. Was interested to see what other enemies we could petrify or if there were ones you could miss without him in party.

Joking aside, where I'd turn Quin into a cute bunny girl (I have Sariel and Byvernia), I think Quin has enough story and personality to stand on his own as a companion. There's enough there for a writer to be able to have him comment or react in their scene. Any larger content would likely take...

I finished reading through Odoacer's document. The sex scenes are solid enough. It feels a bit unwieldy at the intro. Some of the sentences and wording could be reworked to cut down on semi-colon use and just make them more traditional sentences. I didn't note too many, as I know this is just...

What?! Give him some boobs and get rid of that unwieldy penis? I mean... if we have to... For the good of the game. But doubtful.

Obviously, this is the place for gripes. I am not downplaying your feelings. In response to this part, I have to disagree. Naturally, you're entitled to feel or have your own perspective on this, and I am just sharing my observations. I have never once thought Kinu treated the Champ as a random...

I wouldn't expect them to have an image for a whole bunch of different sizes. I think the implication in most meetings is that when she's not with you, she's out in the woods taking dick from leothrans, frost elves, or others passing by an inch at a time, so even if you take some from her, she's...

Yep, but we can't help Lusamine get fertile (yet). Some magical herb, some magical artifact, dealing with Evergreen, giving her money so she can do it herself (or she'd just have to use her new womb to have her baby, though I can understand her not wanted to give up her first baby, ergo earning...

But... my Champ is waaaay smarter in-character than my real-life avatar. Can't we just do an Intelligence check, so I can drink some booze in a bar and raise that stat temporarily before the scene?! What kind of game is this that you expect us to read?! I just look at the pictures and keep...

I think the idea of the kitsune being more integrated is a fine idea. I think that's actually something that is being done with the Champ's presence (or not, depending on if they choose to). You free their princess, you show that not all foreigners are out to kill them, and you learn that not...

Finished reading through the Gao-Ju document. Seems solid as a foundation and concept. Covers a lot of bases for the scene so far (being the first and second meeting). Obviously guys aren't my thing, but I noted any typos, concerns, and suggestions or opinions. If it gets approved for expansion...

Sure, maybe not your Champ, but mine's like a chocolate penis that ejaculates money. Demons are obsessive and my cock is the only thing that brings him to climax. He's like, "Yummy!" and when he gets that surge of lethicite power when it shoots down his throat, he's like, "I'm gonna spend all...

I think you misunderstood. I meant that, the Champ cums out their soul to their newly-created demon. So they have to be Corrupt to corrupt him, but if they aren't careful, when they get to the last treatment, they pleasure makes the Champ lose their soul and it's a bad end, so the player has to...

I finished reading up on Tykis' Corrupt Path. Lots of good writing there. If I had to make notes, I'd say that 'elf', 'soft' and 'slut' were used a lot. Obviously he's an elf, but it was used a lot and by itself with no adjectives to spice it up. I also noted that you gave very little love or...

I always forget what the order is, 'hyper', 'mega', 'ultra', 'giga'... It's been too long since I've played Killer Instinct.

Shout out to this game's editor(s)! Mad props to those spellcheckers! There's so much text and options and variants to go through. Those guys (gals, and other) are amazing. (>.>) (<.<) Whoever they are.

Don't take this as criticism. This is the place for stating what you'd like. I am not faulting you, only taking the opportunity to comment on my own thoughts, not to argue or downplay yours. I like Lyric (girl Lyric). I think the personality she has is spot on and very suited to her. I...

True, but this isn't so much a bug as an oversight. Even with companions there should always be a Back option or a companion check on option to get here (Back would probably be preferable, since it will also let the reader see what companions have content and not have to keep running to the...

Recruitment? You mean like, invite her into the Wayfort? Would she live in the tower where Aileh is? Maybe if you turned away the dragon general and it was vacant? Making the Champ choose one or the other?