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"I'm sorry, Champion. Your ending is in another castle."

My Champ is in Old Belhar, having traveled there after a freak snowstorm covered Hawkethorne. It happened after some catfolk girl came into the Frost Hound looking for help and the innkeeper, Garret, left to help her after no one else spoke up There was some godly skirmish up north after that...

Can kitsune be called 'foxy'? Can catfolk be called 'pussies'? Of course they can, and lots of other things. Bully boys, Beefsteak, Milky moo-maidens, Heifers, etc.

Glad to hear you persevered and made headway. I've held off on looking at the doc since, One, I like the little sheep and want to be surprised, as Two, you had your own editor and probably didn't need multiple voices in your ear. So I am conflicted if I should jump in and hunt for typos or not...

Zuzaan the marefolk magesmith.

I believe Zo falls into this category and also the Harem Cats in a way (though they are safe when you find them).

I rarely got that impression. My main character is not intimate with him and, while the options are certainly there, almost all the threesomes I am in with Brint are us spit-roasting our lover together or one of use taking mouth and the other groin. I think there's one where he bangs you into...

And there was much rejoicing.

Back in the saddle. I read through the document. Surprisingly very few typos. I made some notes and some suggestions. That's all they are, just one person's opinion. For the most part, I think it's solid with the right setup. Probably make sure the Champ has 'Volunteered' or had oral with...

• Hatsumomo the kitsune lumberjack. • Lyla, though she's built more like a gladiator than a bodybuilder. • Gloria the Pupperidge Farm amoozon. • Sandre, the beef of the Sandra and Caera duo. • Annika • Thrud

Kind of depends on if you wanted her dead, doesn't it?

I remember reading about Valencia's mom, always trying to snatch and lure my Champ away, was definitely a solid addition, though I can't remember too many details by now.

Nah... she's perfectly sober and sane. It's the world that's crazy.

If it involves a stat, like Cunning or something, maybe you drink a bit of booze before bed or the game. Assuming the duration doesn't wear off, that might influence things. But I don't know what affects the game outcome to be sure.

Well, there's a distinction when there's someone else in the mix. It's like you having sex with two sisters, or two brothers banging the same girl. Squeezing an ass, holding a breast, or even guiding a cock into someplace isn't quite the same as full-on intercourse. But there's always leeway or...

I finished the Alissa doc. I corrected any typos I saw and noted any inconsistencies or suggestions. Most of them are just that; one person's opinion. Others may agree or disagree. I hope some of it was helpful.

Like HugLife says, sometimes writers don't always take every parser into consideration. They have their own Champ, and they have a vision of the scene they are writing, and it's hard to write out your vision, while having quantum-shifting bodyparts. When I edit and read through, there's many...

I know Nihara, the Tirran priestess notably changes in physical appearance based on Champ's corrupted interaction, that I don't think it affects her personality or anything too much, but the appearance definitely changes.

Most of the docs I read just use a [pc.hasKnot] parser, which will trigger such things regardless of the cock you have. I obviously can't speak to all scenes currently in the game (my Champ has one, with a designer demon-cock and another with a human cock , (or at least, human-looking) as far as...

Wow. What a lot of work. I am barely up to the punishment section. So much effort and motivation. Lots of fun options to pursue. I will hold off on most comments until I finish, but I did want to mention some things I hope are done to set the scene or answer some questions some readers might...