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Thank you for taking the time to look over the writing. I am still adding more to it, because this is the first draft. I waited a day to reply, because I wanted to make sure that this didn't sound defensive and to make sure that this is only to share my views here in case other readers might...

And she totally has a foot fetish, but it changes every game day and she doesn't tell you what it is, the Sex button is just blank until you go through all the TF for feet and legs until you hit upon the hooves, digitrade puppy paws, demon claws, or human toes she randomly wants for that day.

Every time I impregnated Kiyoko, I secretly shared the tiniest, infinitesimal speck of my own soul to the child in her womb. It's almost unnoticeable to me, and my soul will slowly replenish itself over time. The tiny little, insignificant grain of soul sand in the little kitsune will also be...

All fair, he's all those things (well, not an actual uncle). Just like anyone else, being a former soldier is not his whole personality, but it should always be a factor in how he might respond. Now he's just an old man who lives a relatively good and leisurely life, helping out people around...

But, maybe she could teach and help Aya with her primal feelings. Train her to become a force for calm, meditative structure and discipline instead of slowly transforming into what will likely become some foxen equivalent of a werewolf, prowling the forests with her bestial maw, fangs, and claws...

Are you referring to Nash? The corrupt merchant in the Outskirts? Assuming you are, I never saw Kiyoko's comment, I must not have had her in party the times I first met. I assume anything she said would likely be colored by the fact that he's clearly corrupt and all his wares are equally so. She...

I will start looking through it and see if I can catch any typos or offer suggestions. As for June, I have no insight either. Other than I know he has an unnamed brother (who was butt-plugged with hornet eggs at the start of your adventure). Wsan would be the one who would know. That's why I...

That might be the case, but fortunately we're not at the submitted stage even. I probably should have been more clear in the Title, or message, or in the document itself. This is just the chassis and framework to gauge whether an NPC like this would even be looked on favorably or as a net...

And also not only takes brown leaf contraceptives but in order to even have sex with her she requires the Champ to be either sterile or on sterility powder as well. And probably also can't be pregnant at the time, because she's "Not a fan."

I think they're pretty chill overall, since almost no outsider is ever allowed in the den, but I think I know what you're implying. Even then, I think they're mostly pretty chill with you. Some interactions I kind of thought about was, after Raphael's attack on the compound, asking Zo to move...

Have you considered the possibility that she's got nothing to hide and is telling the truth?

I am fully expecting a Silly parser during that scene along the lines of: 'If there's one thing I'm diving for... it's a nice box!" or 'Here I go again... diving after a wet box!'

You know... sometimes when you're playing the bad guy... there's those moments... where you're like, "What am I doing? Am I really... seriously doing this?"" And then I tell myself... "The staff needs me to do this! I'm the editor and I need to [blank] the puppy [blank] [blank] [blank] and then...

I have also let her be captured on this newest play-thru (Dark Knight). Drifa is not a character that gets pushed into any goo that I know of. That might be Azzy and Laiden you're thinking of. To spoiler stuff: The easiest way here would be Or you could use the SPOILER and /SPOILER commands...

Aww, but they need a little TLC too!

Did I write 'non-sexable'? Pretty sure that's not even a word... I must have meant... 'nonsensical'. Yeaah... that's the ticket! Completely mad, like a fox... like a kitsune... fox. Yeah, he's... totally gonna be sexy-fun-times... it's just... gated behind a dialogue challenge that I haven't...

This is my first attempt at writing a character. I am more of an editor than a writer, but I want to learn more about variables and parsers and I figured this might be a good way to practice and get feedback. I tried to intersperse a few different parsers in there and try some different spacing...

Yeah, checked my dungeon just now and didn't see any mention of any elves either, just Alissa and demonic dragoon. I can see them not being expanded on, but I don't see any mention of them being there in the description. I wouldn't have even suspected I had any one else in there.

Yeah, both methods are accepted and correct. As long as it's understandable and clear and the scene works. You typically would use the non-dialogue part if you're inserting thoughts or observations that the PC should know and don't want to have to then reiterate or repeat or parse those thoughts...

You're right! It was all a lie or a misconception! Anyone could remove the Amazon Spear, they just all believed the story was true and no one ever tried. I'm starting to think that's just an excuse the creators made because they just didn't want to have to write options for every single...