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[Hang Out; Try for Kiss] Should be 'thighs'. [Sex; First time] Should be 'seven inch' From the rest of the way this scene is written, it seems like this part shouldn't be italicized. Maybe it wasn't closed properly in the previous line. 'feminine' is misspelled. Should be a space...

I almost always just Tease her into submission (well, as submissive as she gets).

[Fuck; Lap Ride] (in Wayfort) The word 'right' seems either out of place, or misspelled. Maybe it was meant to be 'ring', as in 'slamming into her forgiving ring' or 'inside her forgiving ring'. If it's meant to mean something else, like you slamming into her 'right as' your fingers dig into...

[Sex; Threesome with Cait; Double Titfuck] 'Another hungry pur and Cait leans in ...' Should be 'purr'. [Sex, Ride Her] '... moving up to grope at your breasts,adding to your pleasure.' Add a space between 'breasts,' and 'adding'. '... is enough to spur on a shuddering orgasm of your.'...

[Sex, Threesome with Cait, Ride Arona] Should be 'one of those big arms'. Should be 'both hands'. Should be 'just enough'. 'That big chest of her heaves ...' Should be 'hers' instead of 'her' 'Once pinch of Arona's coal-black teats ...' Should be 'One pinch' instead of 'Once pinch'.

[Appearance] 'Agnimitra' is misspelled. [Sex; Doggystyle] Should be 'them'

[New Year Celebration] Should be 'You look at bell and clapper alike' or 'at the' [Childbirth] Should be 'you can see'. [Talk > Keros:>] [The Sultan of Jassira story] It should be 'count the hairs on both your head and on my tail.' [Talk > Children > Kinu :>] Should be 'that' instead...

[Catching Aya in the cellar] 'Mother's' should be apostrophe s instead of s apostrophe. [Catching Aya > Don't Let Go] Should be 'resolute as it's ever'. [Kinu illness] Should be 'lying on the ground on a futon' or 'lying upon the ground on a futon' or 'lying on the ground upon a futon'...

Kasyrra '... the slift shift ...' Should it be 'slight shift'?

I think the later scenes should reveal that she is totally Baba Yaga. Saggy tits, gnarled teeth, crooked claw-like fingernails, and wiry, gray pubes and all. And then she steals one of your babies... or has one of your babies. Okay... maybe that should be set aside for a dream scene.

I like the Summoning Circle idea. So far I've only been able to summon my Wolf Spirit and play with it, but I do think a few other summons that had some dialogue or just interaction when called in non-combat situations would be nice. Intelligent ones could pass on some lore, others could...

I really like altering the game world, or more specifically, how your actions affect the game world. Upgrading of the nursery, building of the temple,, the potential repair of Wayfort. Choices that affect ease of movement. Maybe finding and hiring an out of work construction crew (possibly...

You massaged and milked them down to a more manageable size. Nice guy (or girl, or both) that you are. It was probably intended to be 'Champion of Winter City' but got confused.

[Shearing wool > Lapfuck] [cont] '... scratching the back of head gently ...' Should be 'scratching the back of her head gently'. 'Well, you just don’t want to pushher too far is all.' Should be a space between 'push' and 'her'. '... only recede into fear when she sees the brutish fury...

Clementine the sheepfolk in Hawkethorne [Sex > Fuck Vag] '... her honey-brown eyes drink in every vein, every inch of your cock as it slowly rises, knowing it’s exact destination.' Should be 'knowing its exact destination', with no apostrophe s...

How about a dungeon-like encounter challenge involving a Wild Hunt encounter? Maybe have it time based around midnight, only having a random chance to appear between 23:00 and 1:00 at a crossroads tile in the Old Forest ( a tile with 3 or more directions). Possibly only after Winter City is...

The Imps random encounters [Combat, Victory, Fuck Ass (Imp Lord)] 'has fallen into his own face' Should be 'onto his face'. '... finally lets your body free of any restrain.' Should be 'restraint'. 'That makes you think It’s about time ...' 'It's' shouldn't be capitalized. 'His flesh...

Hobgoblin toll encounter in Undermountain [Combat, Victory, Cock-sucking] 'Your seed comes form in a massive torrent, forcibly blasting down the hobgoblin's throat in great gouts to land directly into her stomach, ...' Should be 'Your seed comes forth'. [Combat, Victory, Double Dick Ride]...

Thank you for the quick reply. Now to be eeeee-vil.

I am using Steam Development Build 0.4.10. Just wondering how far the current build progresses, so I can start a new run and look for branches I didn't take. I have reached Khor'minos and stopped the weapon smugglers and am currently waiting for a ship at the Wayfort. Is this the current end...