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more missing spacces “Hey, where’d your friend go?”one of the nearby partiers croons. “Dunno, went off to the bathroom or something! Better get back soon, or I’ll spend all his money!” “D’awwhahawhaw, you’re such a prick!” “Ooh, didn’t know we had a sixth! What’s your name?”one asks you.

missing space Advertisements catch your left eye while whispers tickle your right ear. Techno-trance music blares through meticulously engineered sound systems, making the whole building feel as if it’s vibrating. Dolled-up whores dressed in silk slide through your personal space,extending...

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extra space . The fervor and concentration with which he traces your fem-cum-dripping opening with his chitin-gloved digits and flicks at your pierced teats with his long, thin tongue makes you guffaw - but the intense blush this causes to break out over his china-bone features makes you...

missing space You both realize at the same time and once again you’re not sure who actually goes for it first, but you’re almost instantly frenching messily, his cockhead sealed firmly between your matched lips.Instinctually, you make sure you’re the one who ends up with the cock down your...

Sorry that this one is suggestiony, but maybe remove the highlighted comma? imo, it would help the sentence flow better. apologies if im being rude by stating this, and please let me know if i am. Stumbling back through customs, and onto your ship seems to take eons, but the moment you’ve set...

Been browsing through the chnagelogs and saw that you can now take the blue dragon gal on a date. Anyone know anything about where i can find her post jungle encounter?

Maybe replace restriction with restricting But the one thing that catches your attention the most is the occupants. You’ve taken two steps into the building, and in the main hallway just past the foyer, there are two slyveren women within eyesight, and they’re both ass-naked. Even in the...

typo in the first word nThe tentacle slaps at your wrist, sending a surge of pain up through your arm. You hiss through your teeth, nearly dropping your Trick Bracer. Heat lances out from the point of contact, running up all the way to your shoulder. (S: -7)

Another error here

This is a big one folks, not a drill. got this error when trying to enter the shop dead center of Dhaal

Missing period in ellipses Rather than stick around and risk the hydra’s libido kicking in once more, you help slide the girl to a sitting position and retrieve your kor’diiak hide armor, corset and hardlight anti-grav thong. “Th-thank you,” she murmurs meekly when you’ve suited back up.. “I...

perhaps remove the comma after dense As the urban sprawl has spread to every inch of habitable land, the quality of life for the poor has spiraled further and further down. Most labor-intensive jobs have been phased out with automation, while unchecked industry fills the sky with thick...

wow, im ona bit of a streak here. again, sorry about that, but maybe change its to it or isnt to not. either one would work It looks like somebody smashed the side of her face with a blunt instrument, her synthetic skin cracked and her left eye appearing dead. “It’s....” you think about how to...

the ellipses is missing a period. again, sorry for being so anal You stare at the knife in her hands, feeling your jaw slack slightly. “You haven’t.. stabbed anybody, have you?”

perhaps change greeting to greetings. sorry if this one is a bit nitpicky She turns toward you as you reach her, tilting her head and offering you a smile. “Greeting kitsune, how may I serve your needs today?”

same deal here

Not sure what happened here. some kinda error

Lets keep the ball rolling, shall we? pretty sure the period after an is meant to be an ellipses. This is a real shot in the dark, but you always miss the ones you don’t take right. I have an. Lets call it an investment opportunity. Ive read a lot about you, and people who know you say...

Exactly what it says on the tin. Ive heard talk of it but havent seen anything on the wiki or here.