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These are so great!

i made it specify the heatbelt cause that makes a heat area around you and gwen is on top of you. If other things provide heat in that fashion they should be included, but if its just like warm clothing it wouldnt make as much sense cause she'd freeze since shes pulling off her clothes.

Now since this turned into kind of a witch hunt I dont think you meant anything bad by it, it just ended up feeling kind of out of place given the nature of the contest and how it ended up looking outwardly. I did like the bare minimum of "Is this submission christmas appropriate and/or complete"

also since theres no link to experiments with mrs cloose for some reason Experiments with mrs. cloose p.1 and p.2

Tbf yeah i feel like at best its discouraging to new writers who see their things marked as yellow or red. Things that are very short don't need the kind of table of contents and such you're looking for, so your grading just comes across as personal preference, which doesn't really belong in an...

Popping in on the side of artemis in this one. I'd prefer to think he was preparing for complaints about not being able to have sex with the character than anything homophobic. was probably scared of precisely this reaction.

also what was wrong with my short piece?

63 entries this time it looks like? not too shabby

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gGSl68IwtiUsm1eLsL9wbZJImrrZ9yt27ChepH8pcDg/edit?usp=sharing Second short sub. christmas memories

This time with less rushedness, we have christmas shopping with gwen! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OsewOihT1x8-TyQpHlE-6PPcypi8jjwJG3edNTlwwkE/edit?usp=sharing

I cant wait <3

mmm hairy girls <3

i'm planning a 1 time silly mode encounter with bringing christmas to various inhabitants of the main town on mhenga

are the red ones the ones you dont reccomend reading :? Or scratch dont reccomend reading per se, but are in a tough spot editing or content wise?

Magikarp i dunno if you're in here, but the feel and descriptions in your spider suit thing are super good. There are just enough grammar snips to pull me out of it though :( i have the feeling with a little fixing it would be mega unf tier

Wow theres a lot. ima have to read the competiton tomorrow after work

Fug all yall voting no on the poll, i did it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lXrh2ut2_RoAIVAwBjGjdMxsKXQDjall7L0G8kLmLR4/edit?usp=sharing

I possibly plan to do something with the pc getting a personal lapdance and maybe some exposition for them when the fancy strikes me again. But for now i just wanted to get the single scene in because i hadn't for ever.

there are 2 separate vagoozles, not sure if 2 wombs, the race was made by mira minx from fenchat

that should be fixed now, knew i was forgetting something >.<