Fixed [0.8.13] Temple of Challenge typos

[TrapMawile]

Compiling a list of typos I see through the Temple of Challenge as I go through it.

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The initial dive down into the temple; missing space.

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Past the blocked door; another missing space

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Jotun Father introduction; likely supposed to be "prick".

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After Jotun Father fight; sentence feels run-on. Might want to split it or punctuate it a different way?



Soon after; this feels like two sentences accidentally merged together. Not sure if it's intentional, maybe going for a "Champion is confused and has to reboot their mental monologue" vibe? Otherwise it reads awkwardly.

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Post-Jotun Father room, probably supposed to be "No doubt this wasn't the first time".

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Amethysta intro; unnecessary comma after "curvaceous"

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After Amethysta fight; probably supposed to be "It takes several eternal seconds"

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Alchemy room; could either be "making something bright, harmless, and sticky that disperses cleanly" or "making some bright, harmless, sticky substance (or whatever preferred synonym) that disperses cleanly" (or some other reconstruction of the sentence)

 

[Libelous]

Most have been fixed, waiting on word for the rewrite parts.

WIP.

 

[Libelous]

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After Jotun Father fight; sentence feels run-on. Might want to split it or punctuate it a different way?

Has been changed into: When you swim over to lift the armor, it slowly shrinks itself down to your size — even morphing a moment later to accommodate your [breasts] — but the density is awe-inspiring even with the water's buoyancy.

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Soon after; this feels like two sentences accidentally merged together. Not sure if it's intentional, maybe going for a "Champion is confused and has to reboot their mental monologue" vibe? Otherwise it reads awkwardly.

SKoW says its intentional, so no change for this one

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Alchemy room; could either be "making something bright, harmless, and sticky that disperses cleanly" or "making some bright, harmless, sticky substance (or whatever preferred synonym) that disperses cleanly" (or some other reconstruction of the sentence)

Has been rewritten into: "It's surprisingly simple after you look the assortment over; most of the ingredients you need are just catalysts, and they will likely work fine for making some bright, harmless, sticky substance. You're pretty sure it should disperse cleanly afterwards."


All bugs in this thread have been address, hopefully to be added by next patch. Thanks.