Compiling a list of typos I see through the Temple of Challenge as I go through it.
The initial dive down into the temple; missing space.
Past the blocked door; another missing space
Jotun Father introduction; likely supposed to be "prick".
After Jotun Father fight; sentence feels run-on. Might want to split it or punctuate it a different way?
Soon after; this feels like two sentences accidentally merged together. Not sure if it's intentional, maybe going for a "Champion is confused and has to reboot their mental monologue" vibe? Otherwise it reads awkwardly.
Post-Jotun Father room, probably supposed to be "No doubt this wasn't the first time".
Amethysta intro; unnecessary comma after "curvaceous"
After Amethysta fight; probably supposed to be "It takes several eternal seconds"
Alchemy room; could either be "making something bright, harmless, and sticky that disperses cleanly" or "making some bright, harmless, sticky substance (or whatever preferred synonym) that disperses cleanly" (or some other reconstruction of the sentence)
The initial dive down into the temple; missing space.
Past the blocked door; another missing space
Jotun Father introduction; likely supposed to be "prick".
After Jotun Father fight; sentence feels run-on. Might want to split it or punctuate it a different way?
Soon after; this feels like two sentences accidentally merged together. Not sure if it's intentional, maybe going for a "Champion is confused and has to reboot their mental monologue" vibe? Otherwise it reads awkwardly.
Post-Jotun Father room, probably supposed to be "No doubt this wasn't the first time".
Amethysta intro; unnecessary comma after "curvaceous"
After Amethysta fight; probably supposed to be "It takes several eternal seconds"
Alchemy room; could either be "making something bright, harmless, and sticky that disperses cleanly" or "making some bright, harmless, sticky substance (or whatever preferred synonym) that disperses cleanly" (or some other reconstruction of the sentence)