A crab's gay writings

orropo

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Knife-wielding Crab said:
Sub Nash becomes more attatched to the PC than dom Nash.

I wanted to get across that he really is quite lonely and the "shady merchant" is mostly a facade. Dom Nash has no reason to drop that facade, sub Nash does in some scenes.
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oh okay, thanks for answering, one more question though will dom nash get like any character development(?)(i dont know how else to call it) to drop the facade? just wondering
 
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Knife-wielding Crab said:
Done with my editing of Nyze. Will put it up here if anyone feel like helping or give their opinion before I submitt.

Nyze sexpack
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Read through it. Like valk42 said, adjust the bee mention, and the wasp mentions maybe, they aren't too egregious (at least I don't think anyone will come at you with a crab-knife). Other than some typos, I would say my only concern is the Titfuck scene. Obviously I assumed Champ was gonna be doing it, but I was wrong.

He has no tits, so it's more of a Chest Rub thing. I don't have a problem with Champ getting dommy and jerking themselves off on him, but I just didn't 'feel' the parts about him squishing his pecs together to make cleavage. He's always came off as being slender and athletic and very toned. That might just be me and no one else, but it just didn't fit the image of him just being able to hunch his shoulders and make a valley. Again, I don't have a problem with the act, it just feels like it would be more rubbing and grinding on and between his pecs than tit-fucking him. But... I am not a titty-fucking expert... and obviously the totally hot, totally real woman I did that with once or twice had totally hot, totally real breasts, so my ability to picture it may be faulty.
 
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Ace Hangman said:
Read through it. Like valk42 said, adjust the bee mention, and the wasp mentions maybe, they aren't too egregious (at least I don't think anyone will come at you with a crab-knife). Other than some typos, I would say my only concern is the Titfuck scene. Obviously I assumed Champ was gonna be doing it, but I was wrong.

He has no tits, so it's more of a Chest Rub thing. I don't have a problem with Champ getting dommy and jerking themselves off on him, but I just didn't 'feel' the parts about him squishing his pecs together to make cleavage. He's always came off as being slender and athletic and very toned. That might just be me and no one else, but it just didn't fit the image of him just being able to hunch his shoulders and make a valley. Again, I don't have a problem with the act, it just feels like it would be more rubbing and grinding on and between his pecs than tit-fucking him. But... I am not a titty-fucking expert... and obviously the totally hot, totally real woman I did that with once or twice with had totally hot, totally real breasts, so my ability to picture it may be faulty.
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I may need to reword the titfuck scene so it is more clear that you're rubbing one out on his chest
 
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Hello, congratulation for the last public patch where we can see more of your work. I am interested in demonic Arona is it possible to see your document about her and to be able to read her content ? I am a huge fan of Dom Arona but i can't imagine doing a walkthrought right now where i exile her to see this demonic and aggressive version of her.
I don't want to bother you and if my asking is too much, i apologize. I am super happy my favourite orc lady got more content in the game.
Again thank you.
 
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