Mhen’ga gold myr shop ?

[phrenetik]

from a case description at the exit of town

The town of Esbeth lies a short walk to the west.

A pair of human colonists are standing in an alleyway nearby, haggling with a busty gold myr woman who’s got a box of wine bottles tucked under one arm. A sign in crude English indicates she’s selling Honey Wine... or honey, straight from the tap.

Now I know I can write thing like this I'm just throwing ideas but it would make something for moving them to the planet
that or a new encounter at Burt's bar
or a myr / zil shop

I made this so far
I have
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slowly getting there I guess lol

 

[cool.alexia]

Mengha is for snake kitties, squid girls and bees. From a storytelling perspective the Myr should only appear AFTER the player visited Myrellion. That's when the player gets introduced to the race. A rule of thumb in storytelling is: introduce, then use.

Also Mengha has its own source of honey. That's a conflict. I like the idea of a confrontation between Burt (zil honey enthusiast) and the myr.

 

[SparkleSpats]

Isn't there something like that already in Myrellion? Since it's the next planet after Mhen'ga, she's already quickly accessible. What's the appeal? It seems redundant.

I also believe that there's a conflict of interests, since the Zil are the main species encountered on the planet. Following a certain quest, the Burt's Badass Mead Hall should be able to pump out all the honey mead anyone could want. In either case, Burt himself seems to have a fascination with the Zil exclusively, and likely be uninterested in having a joint venture with her.

 

[NotYouNorI]

Since it's the next planet after Mhen'ga, she's already quickly accessible.

No, this is not true. The next planet after Mhen'ga is Tarkus, the junkyard planet, after which you get to Myrellion.

 

[phrenetik]

Burt himself seems to have a fascination with the Zil exclusively, and likely be uninterested in having a joint venture with her.

who said its a joint venture ?
I mean I chose to send the queen to mhen'ga so I would assume there is some interaction with them at some point beside going see her and asking hey what up ? it may be hard to do but no queen no shop a queen some kind of red myr stall . have some venom there other myr stuff

 

[Savin]

-snip-

OP was talking about after the PC moved the Gold Myr Remnant to Mhen'ga; that's a thing you can do in a quest on Myrellion.

That said, yeah, if you wanna write up some more Remnant stuff for Mhen'ga, that'd be groovy.

 

[Nonesuch]

I for one cannot imagine anything that could go wrong in a scenario where the threat of a race being genocided resulted in a number of them being allocated a colonial land right on top of its current inhabitants.

 

[phrenetik]

I for one cannot imagine anything that could go wrong in a scenario where the threat of a race being genocided resulted in a number of them being allocated a colonial land right on top of its current inhabitants.

OHHHHH Now That something interesting

 

[sumgai]

I for one cannot imagine anything that could go wrong in a scenario where the threat of a race being genocided resulted in a number of them being allocated a colonial land right on top of its current inhabitants.

Thank goodness this isn't the real world and the two groups might have a chance to live together with minimal friction. Worse comes to worse, the Gold Myr are adapted to living underground...

 

[phrenetik]

updated the 1st post with some thing I did

 

[Dark67titan]

Just imagine what would happen when war queen meets Quinn

 

[phrenetik]

Just imagine what would happen when war queen meets Quinn

well I kind of make them turn blind eyes in my thing
I mean both are the don't mess with my shit and I wont come over and deal with you types
im sure both of them can cooperate