Zhat Zhing Candy - Yinglet Transformative

[Jarylan]

Been sitting on this long enough, so I better just submit it or cancel the idea.

This is a document outlining a TF item to turn the player character into a yinglet (or close as possible). Yinglets come from the webcomic Out-of-Placers.

Permission to use the species and create this item has been given by Val Salia, creator of the comic and yinglets.

I also appreciate feedback, if possible. Hope this appeals to folks!

Jarylan's TiTS Submission 1: Yinglet Transformative

Submission Proposal: A Yinglet Transformative Table of Contents: Foreword Item Description Transformative Effects Racial Breakdown Descriptions and Parser Information Foreword: The purpose of this document and submission is to outline a proposed transformative for Trials in Tainted Space, capa...

docs.google.com

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Permission to use the species and create this item has been given by Val Salia, creator of the comic and yinglets.

No shit!

Well, best of luck with this dude! Hope it gets in!

 

[Jarylan]

No shit!

Well, best of luck with this dude! Hope it gets in!

Well, I figured getting permission was smart. So, I did that before I did any writing.

Ended up asking some anatomy questions too. Canonically, female yinglets do not have a clit. But since TiTS doesn't seem to handle "0" clits well, I just worked around that.

Transformatives are rarely completely perfect anyway.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Transformatives are rarely completely perfect anyway.

Yeah, don't bother trying to please everybody. That's a recipe for disaster if ever I've seen one.

Having given the doc a skim through, as someone who hasn't looked at the comic in since pre covid, I'd say you've done fantastic!

 

[Jarylan]

For the curious, this has been edited and tentatively accepted, having been moved to the coding queue, I believe. We may well see it someday!

 

[Jarylan]

It's... it's actually in! Something I did was PUBLISHED!!

Only for backers right now, and I need to test the heck out of it.

But even less excuse not to work on Keilin. Gonna have to take a crowbar to that writer's block.

 

[Jarylan]

Okay, so found one major oversight on my part that isn't a spelling issue.

I had intended the candy to also alter the user's vagina, if they have one, but while I wrote a description of a yinglet vagina, I did not apparently add it to the effects table or write the transformation blurb.

I will correct this tomorrow, it's near midnight now.

Mea culpa. Gosh, all the errors just become so obvious once things are live...

 

[LeDoraggo]

Hey, congrats dude