Also at least one bad end needs to be sexy it is also an unspoken ruleThe document looks a lot cleaner but:
- You have met literally only one of the four dungeon requirements and as I said before you need to meet at least 2. (More is better)
- the one you met (puzzle) isn't even properly met as you don't even know
- what kind of puzzle it is (you should base it of already existing puzzles or design your own puzzle)
- why is their a need for a puzzle (for example the black void used a device on the door interface and requires a puzzle to remove) (they obviously placed it there to prevent anyone from going in whilst they cleaned the compound)
- When designing your own enemies you need to document how they fight which techniques they use and when (this doc contains design instructions https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ojv7Jvc-wxmWGTaJERIZ09zlRQbetW9Mtud18MDzhuA/edit#)
- this is a porn game at least add some sex into the dungeon or as a reward for completing it.