Wrote a Minor Mob Expansion

Jan 9, 2019
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So I wrote a small expansion for the male Kaithrit Secops mob on Zheng Shi to allow the player to catch anal on victory to allow a more... mutually pleasing experience. I've never wrote a lewd piece before, and haven't even touched fiction writing since high school, so I would appreciate some feedback and suggestions if anybody is willing to provide, preferably with experience writing pieces for Trials in Tainted Space.
 

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Jan 9, 2019
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Please post this in the Event Submission subforum, and include a link to the Google Doc.
That was my intention. Just figured I'd see if I could run it by someone else before actually attempting to get it in the game, hopefully increase my chances of success.
 

HugLife

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That was my intention. Just figured I'd see if I could run it by someone else before actually attempting to get it in the game, hopefully increase my chances of success.

Yeah, the event submission forum is how you do that. You had the right idea but put it in the wrong place to start with. You start off with basically this exact thread but over there, and then you move on to submitting it to Fenoxo directly.
 
Jan 9, 2019
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Yeah, the event submission forum is how you do that. You had the right idea but put it in the wrong place to start with. You start off with basically this exact thread but over there, and then you move on to submitting it to Fenoxo directly.
I thought the idea was to seek out help before attempting to publish to make it easier for the editor or whoever is reading it. Guess I must've gotten a little mixed up. Thanks.
 

HugLife

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I thought the idea was to seek out help before attempting to publish to make it easier for the editor or whoever is reading it. Guess I must've gotten a little mixed up. Thanks.

It... it is? That's what we're all saying. The Events Submissions forum is exactly where you go to seek out that help.

I feel like we're having some kind of disconnect here.
 
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Okay, I think a better way of putting it is that I thought that the Events Submission forum's submissions were sent straight to one of the staff to be evaluated for integration before being denied or accepted. What I'm looking for is feedback. I assumed that I wouldn't get this from submitting, but it's becoming more and more blatantly obvious that I was wrong, so sorry for the inconvenience.
 
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