[WIP] Starchild

[Thebiologist]

So, I'm making a new date for the ExtraMeet. It's a woman and she's made out of ionized gases and electromagnetic forces. Think the Novakids from Starbound. She tends to go offtopic from time to time, specially if she's nervous, she'll try to change the topic of the conversation. Since it's her first time she's definitely nervous when talking about sex.

Long story short: She's a new species, a gas-ion-magnetic being found by a bunch of scientists and she wants to experience sex with an organic being.

For sex fetishes here: It begins with possession as she accidentally takes control of your body and has her way with it. Tailcock/cunt if you have them will get some fun too and then it'll finish with vanilla sex once she's back inside her body again.


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As you can probably notice I'm not a native English speaker. So, I ask for your help, I need you to find the sentences that are right, but also very wrong. What I mean is, you've probably noticed that non-natives say the correct things, but not the right things. This is the example I use because it works on most languages.

Native: Pass the salt.
Non-native: Would you please bring the slat shaker closer to me.

Both sentences are technically correct (the best kind of correct) but one of those is so, so wrong.
So, yeah, help me find those.

Oh, and I'm also kind of autocorrect-dyslexic. That means I'm dumb and for some freaking reason my brain goes "fuck you" and spells a word that looks almost the same as the one I was thinking but it's not the one I wanted, it's like my brain has a built-in autocorrect and it's very annoying.

Also, also, dashes —, they are not common in my language (hell, my keyboard doesn't even have them), so yeah, I've probably missed a lot of those. On top of that, we use them differently. Like this: Hi —she said—. Well, hello —he answered—.

 

[Crablord]

What's behind the armor? You'll find out probably tomorrow.

let me guess it's another character with a dick

 

[Thebiologist]

let me guess it's another character with a dick

I swear to god, she doesn't have a dick. I've dropped a few hints about her true nature.

 

[Crablord]

I swear to god, she doesn't have a dick

thank god
you have my full support, even if its just a one off

 

[ghostly.winter]

I gave it a quick read through and I like what I've seen so far! She seems cute.

 

[Thebiologist]

Well, I've updated the document with the species and caretaker talks. Damn I promised to make it short and it's already 5k words (and it's still missing 2 talks scenes, 2 appearance scenes and sex). I want to get some opinions before I continue because of Starchild's unusual nature. If she's not appealing, the quality of the content is too low or clashes too much with the TiTS lore I might have to scrap her, so I wanted some feedback before continuing.

So that's it for today on starchild. I'm gonna watch a movie and then work on a secondary project. Ricardo, the porn producer/director. He's a vintage porn fan and wants to hire you to make a cheesy porno on each planet, but his ignorance on the native people results in several, unexpected turns of events.

 

[TFMaster]

Ricardo, the porn producer/director. He's a vintage porn fan and wants to hire you to make a cheesy porno on each planet, but his ignorance on the native people results in several, unexpected turns of events.

Ooo! Ricardo sounds like he’d be a very interesting character! Also it’s good to see you back again Thebiologist!

 

[Thebiologist]

Added the story talk. I'm thinking about cutting the hobbies talk just so I don't make something that's already 3 times as longer as I intended, even longer. So, I think the next thing is Date and Sex.

 

[null_blank]

Well, kinda, but no. My gases were de-ionizing, they said, returning to their natural states,

I thought ionized gas was a gas in it's natural state??

 

[Thebiologist]

I thought ionized gas was a gas in it's natural state??

Not if i remember my physics lessons correctly. An Ionized gas is an excited gas, for example O- or H+ but its natural state would be the more stable, bonded O2 or H2. Ionized gases have higher energy states and are more ractive than ther natural states. To ionize a gas you need to give it energy and then it radiates that energy back. Physics were never my forte, but that's what I remember.

 

[null_blank]

Came for a date, stayed for the science experiment.

 

[Thebiologist]

Well, I'm finally working on the sex scene now and it's over 2k words (the worst part is that I think that's less of half of what I've planned). The whole document is now about 10k words or 20 pages long. Why the hell can't I keep things freaking simple? this was supposed to be a freaking date for ExtraMeet and I freaking applied hard, real science to make a character plausible on porn game where slime girls are real. I think this gif describes how I feel right now:



Odd, the gif shows up when I'm editing, but not on the posted message. Well, you can always click on it anyway.

 

[Thebiologist]

Well, I've finished the part where Starchild abuses your poor boobs (don't worry, I've wrote it in a way that makes sense for flat chested males too) and added a scene for tailcocks (because those won't get enough attention dammit) and that's 1.4k words, dammit we haven't even reached the part with the sex.

Tailcunts are next, but that's after I come from work. I'll probably add a bonus short scene if you have at least 2 tails and the tailcock and tailcunt flags. After that I think I can finally move on to the real deal. Starchild going to town with your own cock and/or pussy. My plans are to make her orgasm herself out of your body and finish with real sex between the 2 of you.

 

[Thebiologist]

Good news everyone! I've finished the tailcunt scene and I'm now working on the Tailcunt x Tailcock scene. That's another 1.4k words there. After that we get to the real dick and pussy scenes and then more sex. Also, I've finally picked an avatar. Hail science!

 

[Thebiologist]

Well, I've finished the tailcock x tailcunt scene and the male scene, adding another 2.4k words into the mix. I've got to admit. I'm not gay, but I found that scene oddly satisfying to write.

 

[Thebiologist]

Female scene is now done.Slightly bigger than the male scene, but that's because I've added extra scenes for big clits and tongued pussies. Tomorrow I'll get the herm scene done and hopefully you'll also get to fuck the real Starchild.

I also found something interesting while making the scene, I checked the TiTS source code and apparently none's ever mentioned where female squirt comes from (the vestibular glands a.k.a. the female prostate equivalent), so I'm the first!

 

[Thebiologist]

I've finished the herm sex scene and the post-sex dialog adding 3k words to the document, elevating the total count to 20k words or 37 freaking pages. I'm definitely crazy. So I'm not gonna finish today, and probably not tomorrow either. Round 2 is next, you'll finally get to fuck Starchild, since she's finally back into her body.

 

[Thebiologist]

Another update today, with 1.7k words. This time you get your dick sucked. Yesterday I did another 1.5k word update with the preamble for the sex scene, but I forgot to update the thread. this time there are no exclusive female/herm/male variants, just a single scene that adapts to your gender depending on your equipment. I guess I'll finally finish oral tomorrow and then we get to fucking.

I've noticed some authors make teasers, so I'll try just this once:

The whole experience was so bizarre, your dick didn’t get sucked it felt more like she’s eating it, swallowing like a python does to its prey. Then it hits you, a jolt travels up your spine as she begins massaging your entire [pc.cock] with her faux-mouth/improvised onahole. Contracting and expanding ritymically, vibrating, ondulating, twitching, spasming, everything. It feels like a deluxe sex toy on demo mode as it runs through all its settings, you can feel nubs forming and disappearing, folds forming and squeezing, pulsing, her mouth changing temperatures, cold, then hot, then even hotter, then normal again, a small tendril probing the entrance of your urethra, teasing a bit before retreating and then burying inside, forcing your urethra open, then retreating again… you've lost count of how many different thing she’s done to you or for how longer she’s been orally pleasing you, it’s too much to bear. Only one thing could describe what you’re feeling right now, bliss, you’re in heaven and your dick is getting pleasured by all the sex toys in the universe all at once. You’ve gotta grant her that, she might be inexperienced, but she is imaginative.

 

[Thebiologist]

Well, today's been a busy day. woke up at 7am and I'm still up and it's close to 11pm, funny thing is tomorrow I have to get up at 6am. Had very little time today to work on the document but still managed to make the female oral scene and began working on round 3, so I added about 2.1k words to the document.

Here is a teaser of the female oral scene orgasm:

More and more tanta-tongue keeps nesting inside your womb, filling it to the brim. The sensation is so bizarre, but you’ve enjoyed every last inch of her tongue as it pushed its way past your cervical opening, but you’re fully stuffed and now it’s finally time to pull out. You tap at Starchilds head, indicating you’ve had enough, she gets the message immediately and begins to retract her tongue on a continuous, fast and steady motion. As her tongue slides out past your cervix you can feel every bump, every fold, every nub brushing against it, your body is unsure if it’s getting fucked or giving birth, the overwhelming sensation drives you insane, your brain just smashes the pleasure button and throws it out of the window. You keep moaning like a bitch in heat, enjoying every last inch of Starchild’s tongue as it leaves your body until you can’t take it anymore and you let out a sharp cry of pure pleasure that echoes across the room. Your body tenses up, your back arches and your climax finally hits you.


You cum hard, your pussy begins to spasm erratically, pushing stream after stream of your fem-spunk, bathing Starchild’s face in the process until it’s fully covered in your [pc.girlcum], but it isn’t over, you keep cumming and cumming, orgasm chaining after orgasm, an unending torrent of pleasure flooding your overstimulated system, you can’t help yourself and you spread your pussy wide open with one hand and begin furiously rubbing your clit with the other, causing more and more of your [pc.girlcum] to squirt out of your vestibular glands, draining them of all their load. Your final orgasm is wild and intense, making your hands squeeze hard on your clit in response, milking it for every last drop of pleasure you can draw.

 

[Thebiologist]

Well, today's the 14th day I've been working on this project, and I'm nearly done when it comes to amount of content. I'm half way through the final female exclusive sex scene and that's the final one, then a bit of an afterword and I also have to write her naked, suitless appearance. So far the document is already 27k words long.

 

[Forget Me Knot]

27k words long ????? Wow, that sure is some commitment. :0

You must pace yourself and set goals extraordinarily well! Personal projects are easy to begin and hard to finish in my experience so, I highly admire anyone who has the drive and dogged determination to continue persevering. I can't wait to see what other ideas you tackle in the future!

Side-note: you must get this a lot but I love your avatar. It's soooo Iconic! (And makes me sorta wish that Dr. Lash has a pervy yet affable scientist brother or cousin that he doesn't talk about much oddly enough.)

 

[Thebiologist]

27k words long ????? Wow, that sure is some commitment. :0

You must pace yourself and set goals extraordinarily well! Personal projects are easy to begin and hard to finish in my experience so, I highly admire anyone who has the drive and dogged determination to continue persevering. I can't wait to see what other ideas you tackle in the future!

Side-note: you must get this a lot but I love your avatar. It's soooo Iconic! (And makes me sorta wish that Dr. Lash has a pervy yet affable scientist brother or cousin that he doesn't talk about much oddly enough.)

First, Thanks and also, I have a thread for that HERE. You can vote and decide future projects.

Today, I don't plan on writing anything really, just rest for a bit. I think I might finish the female sex scene tomorrow and I'm guessing in a few days I'll get to the rewrite and edit phase, fix grammar, odd sentences, spelling, punctuation. I haven't done any of that.

27k words isn't really that long, some projects from the top writers are hundreds of pages long. Compared to them I'm just an amateur.

 

[Thebiologist]

Well, I've finally finished the F/F exclusive sex scene. 1.8k words of rough fingering and tribadism. With the afterword that adds up to 2.5k extra words on the document and we're already at 29.5k words or 55 pages (of which 20k words are just sex scenes), so close to 30k. well, I still have to write her appearance, but still, so close.

Anyway, her baseline content is already done. I'll probably finish her appearance tomorrow and focus on the rewrite and edit phase, moving this thread to the submissions subforum so people can help me fix this whole mess if they want. I'll let it sit there for a week or two while I work on polishing and fixing grammar, spelling, etc. and I'll try to work on my small side-project at the same time. Some dialog to Anyxine and her secretary on Uveto (no sex though, they are not my characters, just some basic trivia about Rhenworld and Uveto).

So, this concludes my first project, well, second if you count Kattom's guns, but this is my first ever sex project. I think I've learned a lot, even if it gets rejected, I enjoyed writing her.

 

[Providence69]

wow good job

 

[Windcaller]

Played that scene yesterday, and really enjoyed it. Amazing work!