I have some comments to make:
1. Some parts of his appearance are things the PC would only find out after the "His Gender" talk scene (especially the rapid muscle expansion), so you should probably gate those parts behind having done that talk previously.
2. Regarding penis girth: girth specifically refers to the circumference of the penis, while thickness is the diameter. Both are determined not by a flat number, but by both the length and thickness ratio of the penis (thickness = (length/6)*thickness ratio, girth = thickness*3.14), so increasing penis length also increases both thickness and girth. I think it would be possible to change the girth separately from the length (DracoGuard does something similar with knot size ratio), but that should probably be a separate treatment to increasing the length; otherwise, there's significant potential for players to make a wrong decision and wind up with a far thicker penis than they intended.
3. 'Refractory rate removal' implies setting refractory rate = 0, which would mean no more cum production at all. I think what you're looking for is 'Refractory period removal'.
4. How are you going to make virility enhancement worth it? We already have Fertite+, which increases fertility and/or virility (depending on genital configuration) with no side effects, which seems to be the same thing as you're going for here. Unless it's cheaper than 240 credits per 10% increase, or has something else going for it, it's not going to outclass Fertite+.
Also, it is possible for Steele to gain the Infertile perk at character creation, which would make this treatment useless, so it should probably be greyed out if Steele has the Infertile perk. There's also the Infertile status effect and the Firing Blanks perk to consider, both of which make virility increases useless but can be removed with (again) Fertite+.
5. Nothing related to decreasing stuff and/or female genitalia? Why not? If there's an in-universe reason, I think it should explicitly stated somewhere (probably the first time looking at his treatment menu, or in a talk option unlocked by looking at it).
6. If Steele knows that Lorelei is working for the UGC, I think it would be a nice touch to add in the "Why Here" talk scene something along the lines of 'You decide not to tell him that there's a UGC secret agent right across the hallway'.
7. Talk options should have repeat variants with, at the very least, Steele not being surprised by/ignorant of things they didn't know about the first time.
8. One of the options is to talk about the Cyberpunk's boss. Given that Steele is going to wind up encountering (and probably beating) the bosses of all five of Zheng Shi's gangs, you should run anything involving them past Fenoxo first, so that you don't wind up contradicting Fen's plans for them. Especially given your description of the Cyberpunk's boss: if anything, the boss would probably be the most augmented out of all of them.
@TheShepard256
Fuuuuuuuuck, why did you ask so many questions...? then again it's my fault for not thinking out a real plan to begin with...
1. in the intro if the pc decides to enter, they will get hit with a massive cumblast, and Inkey's junk is fully exposed at that point. It would be ridiculous to make the someone go through sex scene to "unlock" said thing in the appearance. however, i am going to edit the intro in a way that makes the pc see his pussy for only a split second, and only by asking about his gender or having sex with him will set his gender in "appearance" to maleherm.
2. this has been "partially" fixed. i say partially because all the ones that should have had "thickness" instead of "girth" i recall having replaced them.
3. has been corrected, i thank you deeply for pointing that one out.
4. That i have made worth it in a way. per increase of 10, it will cost a 100 credits, and of course per increase of 1 it will cost 10 credits. so it is somewhat cheaper. though i could have just put the price higher for a simple reason. like, would you rather keep holding down a certain button to continuously increase you fert an verl or would you rather just use more money but waste less time both ingame and irl?
5. This one is understandable since i didn't really make it obvious in the why here scene. and maybe it still isn't. The basic princip behind it is that he does specialized treatments, as in they only affect what they should affect and nothing else. hope that clears that up.
6. Oh that. i'll try to write a scene for that later, but while i ma not have written this yet, he already know about her, and she does about him too. she tried to collect his bounty but got her ass handed to her like it was nothing. He later made her spill the beans about why she came after him, found out soy stuff, struck a deal and asked her to collect evidence on a certain person in exchange for good amount of money.
7. Noted. Will do that when i really have the chance.
8. I know, and i have "marked" her name as a placeholder more or less. i will ask and consult Fen on this when i find the right moment to. And yes i know that she would be the most augmented of the group, and she is. but i was planning to make it special in a way. At first glance she doesn't appear to be heavily augmented, because most of them are internal. most of her bones and organs have been augmented, her tits, vag and dick as well, along with her eyes, nerves as well some things in her tail, along with some of the skin on her palms and feet being augmented to output at least 75000V of electricity at max with ease.
I know this may not be satisfactory, but it's what i got for now. i will see you in a few, i need a nap first dammit.
